Me: Kayle
Rate: 10.0
Comment: I really like the story so far:) it has no errors such as spelling and grammar so that's good. Just make sure that you give more details and pull the reader in! I prefer cliffhangers.. It adds more suspense:) but.. I love the story! Update!

Friend1: Maddy
Rate:10
Comment: update girlllllllll!

Friend2: TT
Rate:9
Comment: nothing wrong with it... It love it:) but just giving a 10 makes it seem.... So....... Okay I don't know what it makes it seem so just a 9! Love it though so much! Like Kayle said, grab the readers attention.

Friend3: Vanessa
Rate:10
Comment: ugh... Forget what TT and all them was saying! The stories perfect girl! But it's not so easy maintaining a perfect story to stay perfect! So try your hardest to keep the reader wanting more because I would love to see this story on the popular page:)

Friend4: Bria
Rate: stuck her middle finger up at me.
Comment: Get the computer out my face! I'm not typing anything! Get it out my face before I make you get it out my Face! Ugh, leave me alone! I swear you guys get on my nerves. Oh and the story was good fivesexof1d girl.

Notes

Lol... Welp those are the girls that are going to be helping out with these! I'm just writing what they say from their mouths! So...

Just comment below a story you want me to review:)