Dollhouse
*Someones review*
Comment:
I've always loved stories about ghosts, vampires and werewolfs. Your story is one of the best supernatural story I've read. It's really great. You have few spelling errors but that's okay. Grammar and punctuation is good, all I could say is keep writing this story.
Oh and don't start by introducing the character like 'Hi I am....'it sounds cliche, it's better when it's a mystery and people find out themselves in the story, it gives them curiosity about finding the characters personality.
Rating: 8/10!! Great job
I've always loved stories about ghosts, vampires and werewolfs. Your story is one of the best supernatural story I've read. It's really great. You have few spelling errors but that's okay. Grammar and punctuation is good, all I could say is keep writing this story.
Oh and don't start by introducing the character like 'Hi I am....'it sounds cliche, it's better when it's a mystery and people find out themselves in the story, it gives them curiosity about finding the characters personality.
Rating: 8/10!! Great job
Grammar and spelling are NECCISSARY.
10/24/14