Hate Breaks Us Apart
Familiar Voices
Susan's POV:
We left the room, locking it behind us. Suddenly Missy, our other sister, came rushing over. "There's people in the store." She whispered out of breath. "Are they looking for Andrew?" I asked.
Andrew was our neighbor. He was in the hostpital now. He had severe memory loss. That's actually how we found Amanda. He spotted her when we were trying to get her checked in.
I had grabbed Amanda, and Makenzie held her feet. Te two of us had carried her through the hostpital without any questioning. That hostpital needed some serious security updating.
"I don't know. But they kicked the door down." She replied, still gasping. "Police?" Whispered Makenzie worriedly. "No. They would have called out police." I whispered, thinking who it could be.
Then it hit me.
Louis's POV:
"C'mon." I whispered, and we slowly headed towards where I had seen the figure disappear. We stopped right outside te entrance. I turned around and mouthed one, two, three. I took a deep breath, and we jumped around the corner.
Three voices screamed making me and the others scream. "WHO ARE YOU!" Screamed one of the girls. "WHO ARE YOU!" I screamed back. The screaming stopped and we stared at the 3 girls, and they stared at us.
Then I recognized one. Two actually. One was Susan, but the other looked just like her. I didnt know she had a twin. "Crazy Susan." Muttered Liam. Yup.
This was the girl who had been there since the beginning. Every concert. Backstage passes. She was a dedicated fan. That was nice to have. I thought it was sweet.
The boys tried to convince me not to get too close. I guess I should have listened. She was probably very nice, but she had never liked Amanda.
"You're here." She said with a smile. She walked over and wrapped her arms around me. I didnt know what to do. She put me under a trance. I hugged back.
We left the room, locking it behind us. Suddenly Missy, our other sister, came rushing over. "There's people in the store." She whispered out of breath. "Are they looking for Andrew?" I asked.
Andrew was our neighbor. He was in the hostpital now. He had severe memory loss. That's actually how we found Amanda. He spotted her when we were trying to get her checked in.
I had grabbed Amanda, and Makenzie held her feet. Te two of us had carried her through the hostpital without any questioning. That hostpital needed some serious security updating.
"I don't know. But they kicked the door down." She replied, still gasping. "Police?" Whispered Makenzie worriedly. "No. They would have called out police." I whispered, thinking who it could be.
Then it hit me.
Louis's POV:
"C'mon." I whispered, and we slowly headed towards where I had seen the figure disappear. We stopped right outside te entrance. I turned around and mouthed one, two, three. I took a deep breath, and we jumped around the corner.
Three voices screamed making me and the others scream. "WHO ARE YOU!" Screamed one of the girls. "WHO ARE YOU!" I screamed back. The screaming stopped and we stared at the 3 girls, and they stared at us.
Then I recognized one. Two actually. One was Susan, but the other looked just like her. I didnt know she had a twin. "Crazy Susan." Muttered Liam. Yup.
This was the girl who had been there since the beginning. Every concert. Backstage passes. She was a dedicated fan. That was nice to have. I thought it was sweet.
The boys tried to convince me not to get too close. I guess I should have listened. She was probably very nice, but she had never liked Amanda.
"You're here." She said with a smile. She walked over and wrapped her arms around me. I didnt know what to do. She put me under a trance. I hugged back.
Notes
Hey! Hope you like it. No cliff hanger really. More cheaters to come!!!!!!Again to th person playing Susan. PLEASE DONT TAKE IT PERSONALLY!! You haven't before but I don't want to pull a Channel 4 if you know what I mean. Thanks:)
Update? Like now? I neeeeeed to know what happens next!! I neeeeeed too!
12/6/14