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Hate Breaks Us Apart

Niall

Amanda's POV:

"How did you get him." I gulped. "Was easy really." Replied Susan with an evil grin. "Hes not dead is he?" I asked, looking at the limp body. "OH GOSH NO!" Replied Susan,"just knocked out."

That was a relief. I think fangirls would have killed us if they knew Zayn died. We wouldn't have needed the police they would have found Susan and Makenzie and killed them. If I didnt kill them first.

I loved the directioners. I know it sounds crazy but you feel kind of safe knowing they're out there. Anyway yes it was Zayn slumped over in the chair. All i was thinking is thank gosh they didnt get Niall. Unless they got him too.

Susan brought me back from my thoughts by yelling,"OH CRAP! We have to go now Kenzie. We're late!" She grabbed her sisters arm and dragged her out. "Bye" called Makenzie.

Foe kidnappers they werent very vicious. I heard te door lock. Immediatly I fought against my ropes. I had to go check on Zayn. I didnt know if they had drugged him, hit him in the head, or just scared him like me.

"Zayn." I hissed through the room, trying to get him to stir. "ZAYN!" I hissed a bit louder. It was no use. I sighed, and slumped back. Well the best I could. Kind of hard to move at
The moment.

"ZAYN PLEASE." I whispered frantically, continuing to try to break free. "GAH!!!!" I yelled, slamming backward. I slammed a little too hard, and the chair tipped, and crashed to the floor.

I heard an "ahhhhh." Coming from Zayns side of the room. I could no longer see him, but I figured he could probably see my feet in the air. I guess my crash had woken him. And it hurt my head. Dang.

"Hello?" Called Zayn. "Zayn." I called, frantically kicking my feet. "Amanda that you?" He called out. "Yes!" I called back. This position was extremely uncomfortable.

"What did you do over there?" He asked laughing."I fell." I admired laughing myself. I admit that was a stupid move on my part. "Where are we?" He asked. "Susan and Makenzies."i replied."

"They your friends? Is this some kind of prank because these ropes hurt!" He called. "They aren't my friends. It's that chick I found with Louis that night." I called back.

"Oh crap not crazy Susan!" He called back. "Who?" I asked. "It's a long story." He called. "I've got time." I replied. Seeing as I was pretty stuck. "Ok. It all started when One Direction first got together." He started.

Notes

Hey:). Short chapter but I think it gave some info. Again please do not take it personally about your charcter!!!! Especially Susan. You're charcter is going to be a bit of a stalker if thats alright. Sorry, non of this is personal.

Random note I am looking for more fanfics to read. If you write one and want me to check it out just comment the title:). I need some new ones to read. I currently read Do Not Enter and the sequel to Taken and What I don't remember. If any of you write these congrats!!! I love them!!!

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Comments

Update? Like now? I neeeeeed to know what happens next!! I neeeeeed too!

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Aw thank you so much(:

FoodAddict!! FoodAddict!!
6/16/14

I'm soooo happy you are going to start updating again!! This is absolutely one of my favorite stories on this site!! :) :D

luv u so much as an author.
OMG!!!!!! Update please!!!!!