Amanda's POV:

I sat staring at the girl in front of me. I had dealt with fans of Louis before. Wether they knew of One Dorection or not he had always been popular. However known had actually kidnapped me.

Well besides the Wanted, but they don't count as fans.

My eyes locked on her gun. The thought of all that guns had done to the people I loved caused me to shiver. "You...you..you're not." I stuttered. She followed my gaze, and looked at the gun.

"Not unless we have to." She chuckled. I let out a sigh of relif. "We just have to make you disappear so Louis can be mine." She replied. Disappear!!! I did not like the sound of that.

"Susan?" Asked Makenzie, coming over. "SSSSSH DONT TELL HER MY NAME!" Yelled Susan. I laughed mentally. "It's ok Susan. She doesn't know your last name is Patterson." Comforted Makenzie.

"Thanks." I told Makenzie with a wide smile. Susan palm faced. "Not your first kidnapping I see." I said smugly. I knew both of their names. They were twins so it probably meant teu had the same last name.

I would be able to find them once I got out. If I got out. "Actually it isn't." Said Susan. "Yeah!" Chirped Makenzie, crossing the room. She clicked the lock on the door, and swung it open.

"MAKENZIE DONT!" Screamed Susan, but it was too late. I saw the body tied up, and slumped over. My heart stopped.

Louis's POV:

We pulled up in front of a small shoe shop. "This where te Andrew guy lives?" Asked Harry. "It's what the sheet says." Replied Doug. I swallowed. Why would a old shoe shop owner take Amanda?

"Ok Kirsten. You stay here with Macey, Riley, and the driver." Said Liam. "What! Im coming in! Thats my best friend!" Declared Riley. Liam sighed,"fine."

We climbed from the car leaving Kirsten, Macey, and Steve the driver. We stood outside the door. "Should we just walk in? He could be armed." Said Liam.

"Only one way to find out." I replied, and kicked the door open. "Coming?" I asked the others, and entered the dimly lot room. They followed close behind.

"Hello." I called out into the empty store. At first there was silence. We walked through the shelves, the floors creaking. That's when something crashed on the other side of the store.

We froze. "Louis." Whispered Riley. I ignored, and headed towards the sound. Peering around the shelves, I saw no one. I moved forward and saw it was a shoe box.

Then out of the corner of my eye I saw someone dart into the next room.

Notes

Hey:). Who did Susan and Makenzie kidnap? Who is in the shoe store? Who is Andrew?more updates to come today:).

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