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Hate Breaks Us Apart

Suprise...a bad one

Amanda's POV:

The second I heard the familiar scream I knew as Louiss, I flipped out. Those psychos couldn't lay a hand on him. "LOUIS LOUIS!" I screamed over and over, struggling against the ropes.

"Amanda!"exclaimed Liam's voice from the doorway. "HELP!" I called to him. He was soon by my side, lifting the chair up to the normal position. "Are you alright? Are you injured?" He asked worriedly.

I couldn't help but laugh. Same old Liam. "Im fine, but these ropes hurt!" I exclaimed, struggling for emphasize. He laughed, and began to untie me. While he worked a face I hadn't seen in forever walked in.

"Doug?" I asked, a little uncertain. He smiled. "Little Amanda." He replied. I sighed. He loved to point out how short I was by comparison. He crossed the room in attempt to help get me untied.

About the second the ropes dropped, someone came racing across the room and flew at me. Taken by shock, I toppled backwards, the person landing on me.

"OW!" I yelled, laughing when Riley hugged me. "I am never leaving your side EVER!" She exclaimed, hugging me tightly. "I hate to break up the love fest, but IM STILL STUCK!" Yelled Zayn.

Whoops Id forgotten about him. Liam went to go help him. That's when Louis entered the room, frantically looking around His eyes landed on me, and I could see relief flood his face.

I think we had all forgotten that we were in some creepy fans house or something. We were all standing around talking about what had happened in the past weeks.

Then someone cleared their throat. Susan stood in the doorway holding a gun. Harry, who had followed Louis into the room, practically peed his pants.

"I've had about enough of you Amanda. If I want Louis i need you out of the picture." She declared raising the gun. I was too stunned to move. Then a shot rang out.

I heard screams, and I shut my eyes. The bullet never came. Instead I heard a body hit the ground. I opened my eyes and looked down. Someone had saved my life, but it wasnt Louis.

Notes

Who saved Amandas life? Sorry I haven't updated in forever!!!! I've been crazy busy, but im hoping to update more frequently:). Please comment, rate, and subscribe:)

Also the voting is closed for if I should do a sequel. The votes were tied actually. I was thinking I would finish this story up and start a sequel in the course of 2 weeks.

However if you strongly believe I shouldn't do a sequel and just continue here please let me know:) thank you!

Comments

Update? Like now? I neeeeeed to know what happens next!! I neeeeeed too!

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Aw thank you so much(:

FoodAddict!! FoodAddict!!
6/16/14

I'm soooo happy you are going to start updating again!! This is absolutely one of my favorite stories on this site!! :) :D

luv u so much as an author.
OMG!!!!!! Update please!!!!!