Hate Breaks Us Apart
Struck
Amanda's POV:
I sat stunned. I didnt know how to react to that. I'd be lying saying I didnt still have feelings for him, but I don't know if I loved him. I sat confused. But then it hit me. What if Louis really was depressed and was about to do something stupid.
I jumped up, and rushed from the room. I ran right past Dan, and exited the building. It was raining, but not too hard. I stood on the steps and looked. I spotted Louis running through the nearby park.
I slid down the railing, and shot off the end scrapin my knee. I jumped up, and took off. I couldn't let anything happen to him. Rain began pouring down as I entered the park. Thunder rumbled and lightning struck. I knew it was dangerous to be outside. I had to get Louis.
I had lost sight of him. I continued to run down the trails screaming,"Louis!!!!" Even if He had hurt me, I didnt want him getting hurt. As much as I hated to admit it, Macey needed a Dad.
"LOUIS!" I shouted again as lightning struck nearby. I screamed. I had always been afraid of storms and this one was particularly bad. "Louis!" I called again close to tears. Between Louis running off and the storm, I was utterly terrified.
Suddeny I spotted him. His back to me as he looked over the cliff to the lake he had saved me from. "Louis." I called softer. "Get inside Amanda. It's not safe out here." He said, not looking back.
"It's not safe for you ethier. Lets go." I said, approaching him. "GET INSIDE!" He yelled over the thunder that sounded nearby. "Im not leaving you out here." I said stubbornly. I screamed as lightning struck nearby.
Shaking with fear, I looked back at Louis who had turned his head. "Amanda." He said. Suddenly extreme pain filled my body. I shrieked, and blacked out. Falling to the cold wet ground. The last thing I remember is Louis screaming.
I sat stunned. I didnt know how to react to that. I'd be lying saying I didnt still have feelings for him, but I don't know if I loved him. I sat confused. But then it hit me. What if Louis really was depressed and was about to do something stupid.
I jumped up, and rushed from the room. I ran right past Dan, and exited the building. It was raining, but not too hard. I stood on the steps and looked. I spotted Louis running through the nearby park.
I slid down the railing, and shot off the end scrapin my knee. I jumped up, and took off. I couldn't let anything happen to him. Rain began pouring down as I entered the park. Thunder rumbled and lightning struck. I knew it was dangerous to be outside. I had to get Louis.
I had lost sight of him. I continued to run down the trails screaming,"Louis!!!!" Even if He had hurt me, I didnt want him getting hurt. As much as I hated to admit it, Macey needed a Dad.
"LOUIS!" I shouted again as lightning struck nearby. I screamed. I had always been afraid of storms and this one was particularly bad. "Louis!" I called again close to tears. Between Louis running off and the storm, I was utterly terrified.
Suddeny I spotted him. His back to me as he looked over the cliff to the lake he had saved me from. "Louis." I called softer. "Get inside Amanda. It's not safe out here." He said, not looking back.
"It's not safe for you ethier. Lets go." I said, approaching him. "GET INSIDE!" He yelled over the thunder that sounded nearby. "Im not leaving you out here." I said stubbornly. I screamed as lightning struck nearby.
Shaking with fear, I looked back at Louis who had turned his head. "Amanda." He said. Suddenly extreme pain filled my body. I shrieked, and blacked out. Falling to the cold wet ground. The last thing I remember is Louis screaming.
Notes
Cliff hanger...Kind of. I just want to thank you all for the feedback and views:). It means a lot to me that so many people have read and like this story:). Please comment, rate, and subscribe:).Wht happened to Amanda?
Will she survive?
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12/6/14