I sat there in the pouring rain, my fingers trembling and blood boiling. I watched as Louis pulled up in his driveway and got out of his Audi. He leisurely walked up to me, sitting on his doorstep, drenched and shivering in the freezing rain water. My auburn hair was soaked and dripping wet.

"Hello, love," he said, giving me the smile that I always use to adore. But not this time. He was in big trouble right now.
"Where were you, Louis?" I asked him, trying to keep my cool.
"Oh, I just had a few errands to run," he said.
"Errands? We were supposed to meet at six, and now its nearly eight! Did you forget I was waiting for you all this time? Out here in the rain? How dare you Louis Tomlinson?" I screamed, losing my temper.
"Oh, Haley, honey, calm down now," he said.
"Why? So we can forget this ever happened? Well I've done that plenty of times before, Louis. I've done that enough to know you're never going to change," I retorted.
"Haley, come on now. You know that's not true. I was just a bit preoccupied this evening. I was going to text you, but my phone's dead. " he said. He was trying to reason with me. Sorry Louis. It's not gonna to work this time.
"Shut up Louis Tomlinson! I've had enough of your dumb excuses! I don't care if you were 'preoccupied' or if your 'phone died'. You need to learn some responsibilty!" I screamed.
He groaned. I was getting too loud, but I didn't care. Someone's got to show this fool how to behave.
"Hey, if you're going to scream at me, can we at least take this inside?" he said, pulling out his house key walking toward his front door.

I got up and blocked his path. I had no intention of stepping into this idiot's house again. No way. Not in a million years.

"I would have agreed to that, if the sun was still up. If the time was still six. If I wasn't soaking wet. But not now. I don't think I will be able to walk through your doors ever again." I told him.
"Haley! Please. Listen to me," he begged.
"No Louis! I am not going to go out with a guy who's always in his own world, doing things at his own time! You don't give a damn about me! Nothing about me matters to you!"
"Shut up and listen to me! You are just -"
I cut him short. He hadn't even said sorry yet. What was he thinking?
"YOU SHUT UP! I don't want to know what you think of me. But you don't even care to apologize, Louis! I cannot live with someone like you. I'm sorry, but I think we need a break," I said.
I turned around and started walking to my car, parked on the street. My eyes stung with tears blurring my vision. I couldn't take it anymore. I began sobbing.

"Haley, wait!" he said, running to catch up to me. I just ignored him and continued walking. This time, he came infront of me and blocked my path.
"What do you want?" I said, stubbornly.
"I want you to give me just a few seconds," he said.
I groaned.

To my surprise, he got down on one knee and pulled out a box from his pocket. He was going to propose to me? What? After all this? No!

"Haley, now don't freak out. I'm not proposing," he said, with a little laugh, "But I've been trying to plan this out for a while. All those times you thought I forgot about you, all those times I made you wait hours alone for me to come. I’m so sorry for all that, but I was out planning this for us. I know it was wrong of me to keep this from you, but I wanted it to be a surprise. So...," he opened the lid of the box. There was nothing but a piece of paper in it. I picked it up and read it. One word: 'Aloha!' “What is this?” I asked. My temper had subsided.
“Well, I know how much you love vacationing… so… WE ARE GOING TO HAWAII!!!” he exclaimed.
“Hawaii???” I cried.
“Yeah!” he assured me, getting back up.
“Oh Louis! I love you so much!” I said, leaning in and giving him a long and passionate kiss.
“Wait so does that mean you forgive me?” he asked, his mouth against mine.
“Of course, you nuthead!” I said.
He leaned in and kissed me again. Louis was officially the best boyfriend ever!

Notes

It's too long :(
but hope u like it!

~ Lily <3