Pride - Comments, page 2

LOVE IT

fuck yeah

@Prinny1321
I'm glad you drew my attention to it. It can pull you out of the story when you noticce errors. I'm happy you like the story.

@sellway
No worries, didn't want you to think I was being horrible or anything picking up on it because its such a great story :)

@Prinny1321
It's supposed to be Melissa. Thanks for letting me know. I'm gonna fix it.

Is her name Melissa or Marissa? You're a bit inconsistent with her name... other than that I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter :) <3

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
No. Thanks to Melissa. Louis has stransfered his anger to her.

Did Ashley not get a red tag as well?

@Allforbrits
I'll try to update as soon as possible. Melissa is going to kick a lot of ass in this story.

please update soon i want to see melissa kick ass!

yassss

@Allforbrits
I'm glad. :)

i like it!!

@Allforbrits
I will. :)

Kepp writing! :)