In Too Deep - Comments, page 7

Great update lol ;) Sorry I read the whole thing :)

Great update lol ;) Sorry I read the whole thing :)

@MelissaStylesInStyle
Oh I'm not pressuring myself lol. I don't care how long it takes if it ends up a good chapter. Lol. But I'm glad you took more out of the chapter. :)


@LizzyM101
Yes. I need a vacation to just write. Doing nothing but writing do I can actually think of these things before I write and not have them be an after thought.

@morrison_hotel
I agree with MelissaStylesInStyle it makes sense for later on why Wylla's has such an affect on Niall because already so deeply yearns for her.

@morrison_hotel
You shouldn't pressure yourself! Let the ideas flow naturally. I'm loving the buildup to the part that came from the short story. :p

@MelissaStylesInStyle
Oh see i didn't even think of that. Lol. Thats what happens when you're writing frustrated and under pressure! Lol. =D i need a vacation to just be able to write. Lol

@morrison_hotel
I thought it was good. The Niall part was a nice touch because it expressed the sexual frustration towards Wylla. Also it makes sense why her writing later on affected him so much since he already pictured her like that.

@LizzyM101
Well originally there was no Niall having sexy time but I couldnt come up with anything else soooo thats what happened. Lol.

@morrison_hotel
What was your intent may I ask?

@MelissaStylesInStyle
I don't think it's as good as it could be but it is what it is, i guess.

@MelissaStylesInStyle
Yeah. I'm sure. :P

Well, well... That was worth the wait. :) Great chapter! I am obsessed with this I can't wait for more.

@LizzyM101
That wasn't my intent when I started it. It just happened. I'm glad I toned it down though. Lol.

Lol this chapter was indeed steamy. Thank you so much for updating it was well worth the wait. :D

@morrison_hotel
You're welcome, Ash! xx

@blankspace1

Yay!! Go me! Thank you, Livy. <3

@morrison_hotel
I know but you did it! xx

@blankspace1
This one was a tough one.

You know how much I love this and I feel glad to help you with these chapters :) xx

@LizzyM101 @Niallmylove66 @LilMiiz510
Thanks guys! I really want this to be good.