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ahhhh i just read chapter 22 and i really really really want you to finish i love this story so much
@Maya Collins
It wasn't rude. I'm glad you like the story. I agree it can be a bit confusing. Sorry about that. Thanks for the criticism, being serious right now, love comments. Good pot bad. Thanks for reading. I'll try to make it a bit less confusing in the future but no promises. Sorry. Hope you continue to enjoy it
SORRY IF THAT WAS RUDE I JUST THOUGHT THAT YOU WOULD WANT TO KNOW IF YOU COULD IMPROVE YOUR STORY.AND IF YOU SAY THAT WAS RUDE I WONT SAY WHAT I THNK(SORRY IF THAT SOUNDED SARCASTIC,WASNT TRYING TO BE LIKE THAT)
OK MAYBE I HAVE ONE COMPLANT.ITS JUST THAT IT CA GET VERY CONFUSING AT TIMES LIKE SOMETIMES YOU DONT REALLY EXPLAIN WHAT IS GOING ON TO WELL.AND I CAN GET VERY LOST
@That_One_Person
YA ITS FRICKIN ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I READ(AND IVE READ ALOT OF STORIES ON HERE)THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY.I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND IT IS WRITTEN REALLY GOOD,LIKE I CAN PICTURE EVRYTHING YOU RIGHT IN MY BRAIN ,AND NOT ALOT OF STORIES MAKE ME IMAGINE IT BUT THIS ONE IS JUST SO WELL WRITTEN THAT ITS CRAZY!!!
@CrAzY21
Thanks
@Maya Collins
Thank. My soooo MUCH IT MEANs the world to me that you think my story is good and worth sharing
Food...come to my house with food friend...I love food...ur okay I guess smashy poo...bring me food and u can be upgraded to "good" :) food
@Maya Collins
Its not rude at all. Sorry about the short chapters, some are pretty long others not so much. Its just how I write. I hope your liking the story other than that though.Thanks for reading!!
The bunny is dinner
11/24/16