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The bunny is dinner

CrAzY21 CrAzY21
11/24/16

ahhhh i just read chapter 22 and i really really really want you to finish i love this story so much

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/31/16

@That_One_Person
ya i love it

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/30/16

@Maya Collins
It wasn't rude. I'm glad you like the story. I agree it can be a bit confusing. Sorry about that. Thanks for the criticism, being serious right now, love comments. Good pot bad. Thanks for reading. I'll try to make it a bit less confusing in the future but no promises. Sorry. Hope you continue to enjoy it

That_One_Person That_One_Person
10/30/16

SORRY IF THAT WAS RUDE I JUST THOUGHT THAT YOU WOULD WANT TO KNOW IF YOU COULD IMPROVE YOUR STORY.AND IF YOU SAY THAT WAS RUDE I WONT SAY WHAT I THNK(SORRY IF THAT SOUNDED SARCASTIC,WASNT TRYING TO BE LIKE THAT)

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/29/16

OK MAYBE I HAVE ONE COMPLANT.ITS JUST THAT IT CA GET VERY CONFUSING AT TIMES LIKE SOMETIMES YOU DONT REALLY EXPLAIN WHAT IS GOING ON TO WELL.AND I CAN GET VERY LOST

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/29/16

@That_One_Person
YA ITS FRICKIN ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I READ(AND IVE READ ALOT OF STORIES ON HERE)THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY.I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND IT IS WRITTEN REALLY GOOD,LIKE I CAN PICTURE EVRYTHING YOU RIGHT IN MY BRAIN ,AND NOT ALOT OF STORIES MAKE ME IMAGINE IT BUT THIS ONE IS JUST SO WELL WRITTEN THAT ITS CRAZY!!!

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/29/16

@CrAzY21
Thanks

@Maya Collins
Thank. My soooo MUCH IT MEANs the world to me that you think my story is good and worth sharing

That_One_Person That_One_Person
10/28/16

Hey hey hey guess what...



ur awesome...

CrAzY21 CrAzY21
10/28/16

i recommend for everyone who has a brain to read this story and give it the best rate possible

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/24/16

@That_One_Person
ya im LOVING the story. its really great

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/24/16

That moment when all u wanna do is hug Mikey and ur stomach is hurting because of it

CrAzY21 CrAzY21
10/24/16

@That_One_Person
But smasshhyyyy I wuv u ur my bestieeee frienddddd

CrAzY21 CrAzY21
10/23/16

@CrAzY21
7 you little dont stop.

That_One_Person That_One_Person
10/23/16

I wuv u smashyyyyy pooooo

CrAzY21 CrAzY21
10/23/16

Food...come to my house with food friend...I love food...ur okay I guess smashy poo...bring me food and u can be upgraded to "good" :) food

CrAzY21 CrAzY21
10/23/16

@Maya Collins
Its not rude at all. Sorry about the short chapters, some are pretty long others not so much. Its just how I write. I hope your liking the story other than that though.Thanks for reading!!

That_One_Person That_One_Person
10/22/16

AND IM SORRY IF THAT WAS RUDE THATS NOT WHAT I INTENDED IM JUST SAYING WHAT I THINK

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/21/16

NOT TO BE RUDE BUT THE CHAPTERS ARE REALLY SHORT.I MEAN IM ONLY ON CHAPTER 3 BUT THEY SEEM SUPER SHORT AND I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY SO FAR AND I WANT THEM TO BE LONGER

ZaynMalik'sWife ZaynMalik'sWife
10/21/16

@CrAzY21
Well, I"m going to die, unlike Dot.

That_One_Person That_One_Person
10/17/16