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Story Reviews - Comments, page 2

Thanks you so much for the review love it!!!!! It means the world!!!

JasperRenee JasperRenee
6/28/16

Can you review my story, The Last of Us? Thank you :)


Could you do my story, Icing on the Cake? Thanks hun :)

(If you're still doing these-accepting I mean-obviously you're doing your line up :P)

Could you review Alice In Onederland for me? :)

@Hello-1234-world
Thanks! I find it pretty useless if you're just gonna sugar coat it because it will never help the person (:

jordyhoran jordyhoran
6/10/16

@Carol Clifford
My pleasure!!! overall it was a really great story!! Keep writing!

jordyhoran jordyhoran
6/10/16

Never Cry Wolf

Thank you!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!

I absolutely adore and appreciate this review. Your criticism is duly noted on things to work on. It's not that soccer took up Cal's time, it's that he made ANY free time he had devoted to soccer. So even whilst he was home or it was the weekend, he was at home practicing. This was MY mistake, I clearly didn't emphasize that enough.

I'm pretty sure you read a chapter wrong as well. They had a practice game but it wasn't the day before the big game. I'm pretty sure I write that it was about a week before the game. It's been months since I touched it. I could be wrong.

But thank you Sooo much! This greatly helps and I'm pretty sure I've been leaving you feedback. ;)

I found your story long before one of my subscribers showed me this. :-)

Hi can you review my new story, Love is an Act of War?

I like that you are very honest

She's Kinda Hot

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Wrapped Around Your Finger

by Future Miss Luke Hemmings

Hey can you Review my new story The Rappers Alter Ego? It's a bit different then any story I've done so far, and I'd love some input!

JasperRenee JasperRenee
4/3/16

music book

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Red Queen

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deactivated. deactivated.
3/5/16

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