Fool's Gold - Comments, page 7

@delinquent
Thanks! I am an adult so I would hope so. :)

i love the scope and maturity of which you've written this story with. it's so refreshing to see.

@stylesgirl41
Thanks for the suggestion! I've got plans for both men, don't fret about that.

@stylesgirl41
Thanks for the suggestion! I've got plans for both men, don't fret about that.

@stylesgirl41
Thanks for the suggestion! I've got plans for both men, don't fret about that.

I would like to see their dynamic also but I think a good bit of drama would be Charles finding out and confronting Harry.

@mumblings
I adore you.♡
If you liked this then I'm sure you'll like the next too...well maybe. :)

great chapter! such visuals with Harry lying on her lap all thanks the music video today and Harry laying down

@PoisedPen
Thanks for the input! I'll consider that. :)

I'd like her to return home and see her & Charles dynamic. Allow Louis to see it as well.

I can understand where Louis is coming from. I'd have a hard time being nice if I thought someone I loved was being hurt. I want a chapter with Enola and Charles, so I can get a better feel of their relationship.

@Niall's eyes
No worries love.

@morrison_hotel

oh, ok

@Niall's eyes
Oh thanks! I plan on finishing it but I just need to get more feedback.

i love this story please continue!!!!!!!!!! your a great writer

@mumblings
He said himself he's never been one to bite his tongue...going by the self description.

dang Louis! I mean, he had every right to question, but he sure was feisty about it. and in front of everyone! I'd die!

eeeek!!! she said it!

@mumblings

we'll get there.

loved these chapters. his inner monologue and realization . but oh man, who is he texting?!?!