Fool's Gold - Comments, page 6

great chapter once again! charles... asshat! i'm curious what the other guys thought when they heard how he was talking to her? hopefully remorseful for how they had been treating her.

my heart ached for her as she was undressing and trying to hide herself from him :(

i really love the inner monologue you give harry. i can always picture him seriously having these conversations with himself.

can't wait to hear how harry is going to fix this! what is he going to do to make her realize how amazing he thinks she really is. wahoo!

@mumblings
You know I just realized how I ended that chapter and it's not why the next one is important. Lol. Sorry. :p

@mumblings

You know I just realized how I ended that chapter and it's not why the next one is important. Lol. Sorry. :p

dun dun dun!! who's at the door?!?! ahhhh!!!

@mumblings
Is that the "smut for smut's sake"?

ch 65.... holy shit! so good.

@thelemonandthelime

Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it as much as you do! :)

I am trying to write as much as I can while keeping within the story line. I don't want to get ahead of myself in posting just incase I hit another road block or am not feeling well. And I also need to sleep. Ha!
I'll try to get a bit more up as soon as I can.

Keep me in the loop of what you're thinking! I love hearing it. :)

Nooooooo. More, please! I need to know what happens.

This is brilliant. You're a really, really, like extremely good writer. I don't understand why there aren't more comments and likes, because it's just that good. I'm on chapter 59, and I should be sleeping, but oh well. I just started reading a couple hours ago lol. I'll keep commenting!

@mumblings

He is my voice of reason. That's why. Lol. Come on, love, someone has to be. :)

UGH! why Louis?!?!

@morrison_hotel
Oh it's okay i was stating the truth haha :) sure, i'll let you know!

@onedirectionsprincess6
Thanks so much, love! Let me know if you think it needs anything. And I definitely want to hear from you at the end! ♡

this is one of my fave here! i love the story, i love the plot, i love harry, i love everything! thank yooou for creating such a story haha :)

Thank you. :)

holy wow! I absolutely love Harry in this story! and the way Enola described him as a Greek god, amazing! your words just had me screaming!

@mumblings
As all men should. :)

loved Harry sticking up for her!

@delinquent
I'm sorry. That comment came out dickish. That wasn't my intent. I read it back and I was like "oh balls".
I'm glad you like it! I very much appreciate you taking an interest in what I'm writing!

@morrison_hotel
well from a teens perspective it's wonderful. i wish more people would write this way, regardless of age or intention.