Darkness's light (Haven't been edited) - Comments, page 4

@laurenbush23

Hahah yeah :) I should do that aye...thank you ^_^ I went back and un-bold the dialogue....you could maybe give it another try at reading it? I would love to hear what you actually think of this story :) Thanks again love xxx

@PS2Live the dream
You could always just indent before a character speaks? Just an idea :))

@laurenbush23


Hahaha o.k. :) Thanks for the tip and I am grateful for your feedback. I will not bold the the dialogue from now on then :)....I just thought it will make it easier for people to see when the characters talk :)

Thanks though love :D

No offence or anything but I don't like how you always bold the dialogue. It's distracting and it brings the reader to just read the dialogue, nothing else (i.e. the details). It bothers me enough that I'm not going to read your story.