Darkness's light (Haven't been edited) - Comments, page 3

Hey, thanks for the update.. I like the way how you introduce Harry to the rest of the guys.. One after another with a subtle lunch invitation..

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO

Please don't take it the wrong way :) I love British people and there accent of course....I have a friend who moved here from England :)

@PS2Live the dream

wow thanks

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO

Hahha I don't know....I guessed it :) I had a feeling that you were from there :D

@PS2Live the dream

Yes I am. How did you know?

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO

Hahahha aww you are soo sweet love :) You are from England?

@PS2Live the dream

Yeah. I Know why you mean though. You are really 가장 최고 (gajang choego) Awsome!

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO


Really? That is soo AWESOME :) well...I guess now you can correct me if I am using the wrong Korean language in my other story 'Contrast between you and me' then :)

@PS2Live the dream

WOW Cool I Have Korean in my family.

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO

Hahaha :) It's all good....Yeah I am an Asian but I live in Australia now :) I used to live in Thailand....but I moved to Australia 7 years ago ^_^

@PS2Live the dream

Are you from any part of Asia? I just wanted to know.

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO


Yeah sure :) through the question at me ^_^

@PS2Live the dream

Alright. And I have a question.

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO


Awww thank you so much :) you are way too nice ^_^ Yeah I will update soon :D

Thanks for the Update I loved it. I can't wait for the next on. You are a very good writer.

@PS2Live the dream

Thank you so much

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO

Hahahha :) Sure will do! Just for you love :D

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@vanillabean

Aww thanks for the feedback love :) I really appreciate it ^_^

Now that you've gone through and edited things it makes the story much more enjoyable to read. I really like how the reader is just thrown into what's happening rather than a build up.