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@Jaylee Hemmings 13
Please update this!!! It's great!!!

Haha I am Gabriella in real life xD
But yeah congrats girl, this story rocks so far and I'm sure it will continue this way. Can't wait to see what will happen!! <3

@Avebrew27
Coming soon love thank you so much for commenting it makes my day ☺️

Omg can't wait for the update

@xo_caitlin_xo
Thank you!!! New update will be out in a week or a few days!

Love the story keep going!❤❤

@xo_caitlin_xo
Im glad you liked it ^~^ I will update tonight or tomorrow :b

Please update!!!

@VanitySorrowHeart
Thank you so much I really appreciate it! I'm working on some new ideas and trying something new so hopefully the next chapter will go well!

It took me a month to finally get to reading the - I was swamped after Jamaica, sorry about that. I didn't forget though. I'll say so far you have a good story going. Your character development is nicely put, everything structural wise flows the story itself isn't bad and it starts out in a way that leads the reader to want to see where leads, like what's going to happen. It's a story you should continue with, it's really good so far :) I know you had asked for me to give a review for your story about a month ago. I finally got some time and the story is really good so keep going with it. I hope that helps :)

@Ruby Diamonds
Awe thank you so much it means the world (: <3

Oh my, i just read the whole thing, this is really amazing :) I love it, good job, love

@icedtea.
It's okay I don't really care if there is a story similar to mine I just don't want someone to completely steal my story by copying everything. And thanks I'll read your story too

Hey! I just wanted to say I'm making a story with a big age difference like this but it has a whole different plot line! So please don't think I, stealing your story! I love it by the way :) <3

@Jaylee Hemmings 13

Thank you. Is it almost done?

@Malina Tomlinson
Thank you so much! I will make this one a good chapter :)

@Malina Tomlinson
Thank you so much! I will make this one a good chapter :)

@Jaylee Hemmings 13

YAY!!!!! I"M SO HAPPY! I LOVE YOU STORY!

@Malina Tomlinson
I am finally able to update again!!!!! Yay!!! Because stupid Google updated and my computer broke so I couldn't update on my phone or my computer. So I will start an update right now!

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