The Silence That Surrounds - Comments, page 5

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

lol! I am so happy to hear that! I guess tying down and putting the poor brother in protective underwear - may have been too much for some readers but if he's gagged and unable to communicate...if he has to go and can't voice that, it's not too far fetched. Realistically, some mental facilities do that to patients if they're under lock down, I did some research and there is a ten point restraint system. None of the other gang members like it because of all the time and work that goes into unstrapping and restrapping or undoing things from their face and reapplying but men have more of an unpredicable nature and that's probably why Harry's father put a code red on him, other than it's not a 3 month long high profile kidnapping it's a keep him grounnded until he breaks and gives up the information scenerio so that's the main reason he gave Dylan a code red. He wants to break him and being in that position will break him...one would think.

@VanitySorrowHeart
Well it certainly didn't scare me away!

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

I agree, it would have been. I'll probably end up going into some flashbacks to really get the full effect but for the moment I'm going continue on with having them get done what they need to to bring down Mr. Stone...I think the last chapter scared some people away.

@VanitySorrowHeart
Yeah I feel bad for Zayn, Liam, and Niall. But I mostly feel bad for Harry because he had to.go through this at age 13. Imagine him, a child, learning how to kidnap, kill, torture, and lock away any emotion at the age of 13. Must've been horrible!

@VanitySorrowHeart
Yeah I feel bad for Zayn, Liam, and Niall. But I mostly feel bad for Harry because he had to.go through this at age 13. Imagine him, a child, learning how to kidnap, kill, torture, and lock away any emotion at the age of 13. Must've been horrible!

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

lol a very evil person, you're right. He actually just tapped the noise cancelling headphones to Dylan's head to stop him from taking them off and tapped over his blindfold, the only other thing he tapped was the cloth that was knotted to the back of the gag but not the gag itself - that would def have been overkill, the 10 point restraints are def overkill in themselves, you're right he could have just pulled a Sophia and kept him like that. Dylan is scrawny and weak. He can't really fight 5 against one. I felt more sorry for Zayn and them this chapter considering they did most of the perparing but I agree with you, only someone evil would do something like that.

@VanitySorrowHeart
None of.the other guys wanted to go through with the code red - he didn't either- but louis went over the top by adding extra stuff to dylan. They could've left him there strapped, blinded.and gagged, but louis had to tell zayn go tape the gagged around his mouth and tbat just too much. While the other boys were doing all this, louis was being bitchy about everything and then smiles at the creation of kidnapping of dylan. I mean who does that?

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@coffeeandtea

That's an idea and I can completely see your point :-) hmm, true, it would explain the warning. I'll def be exploring the monster behind the darkness with Harry's father but that's a great anology!

@VanitySorrowHeart
I couldn't help but read the comments, but maybe it's Louis' past. Or maybe Harry's father brainwashed him with evil or something. Like he did horrible things to Louis that made him change completely.

@LIZZY THAT GIRL


lol - he can be except he'd def more level headed then Harry when it comes to bipolarness but what makes him as evil? I gotta ask, I love to hear the other side from the readers

Holy crap! Louis is just as evil as Harry. Omg.

@coffeeandtea


lol, thanks!! I am happy you're enjoying it!

Yaasss loving it!

@coffeeandtea

lol no another 15 to 20 chapters left of this story I hope you like it! Plenty of cool stuff coming up!

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

Aw thank you so so much! That really is a reassurance and your kind words mean so much, thank you! I agree, if I had been put through this I would have trust issues. Right now, Sophia's sanity is chipping away and she's on survival mode, eventually that's going to falter because there's still so much more happening to the poor girl. Dylan is a dick lol he is a self righteous spoiled 21 year old prick - but seeing Harry and the gang treating him as a code red hostage which is way worse than a high profile hostage is going to be interesting, especially since Sophia is still going to be there - luckily Soph was only a high profile which is why she was chained down or attached to something but way waay better than how Dylan is going to be treated. It's not right but I don't blame her for ratting her parents out or even the associate but she will still have the consequences for sure.

I think the gang deserves to live - Harry's father will be very crude, you'll get to meet him here in the next some chapters...oh man, he's bad. So I think once you read those chapters you may change your mind on the deserves to live part lol but I do agree with you, each life is precious. Sophia will at some point have a breaking point and probably beg to be put out of her misery especially as this plan advances. It will be exciting to see how it goes down, I come up with each chapter and write it then just post no timeline or anything yet. I think as it progresses, it will get a better - abet a bit darker because I am going to reach some dark parts but I'm still excited to be writing this.

Thank you so so much again for your kind words, I got a bit let down on losing readers. I expected to lose readers throughout because people wanted a romance and I couldn't give them it but more people because I'm not yeilding to what they want in the story I guess they're giving up which is alright because I still have an amazing group of readers.

Thank you again!

@VanitySorrowHeart
Oooh Lol, I thoughts you were starting the second book after thus haha

Dylan....I don't like him, but he also.don't deserve to. Be tortured. As much as I hate what Sophia's family did go.her, no one ever deserves to be tortured or killed. Including Harry's father. God I hate him, but everyone deserves to live right? Even if they did the worst thing possible. Idk. I just feel like everyone deserves to live. I am not saying that they should be forgiven because that's not possible for me. After everything thag Harry's been through with his father and Sophia being captured, they just can't be forgiven.

Also I really don't see a relationship happening with any of the boys or sophia. A part of me want harry and sophia to.be together for some reason, but another part of.me is like no. That's never going to.happen! I agree with you 100% that this story needs to.stay as close to real.life as possible. I know that if I ever got kidnapped by anyone.even 1D and get tortured like that, I would.never forgive them!I would have a really hard time trutrusting anyone . I would be mentally,emotionally, and probably physically scarred for life. I probably would even what to.live after everything she's been through.I would.lliterally be begging to die bc dying is better than being tortured everyday for something that's out of your control. You really are an amazing writer a.d every word that I say to encourage you, I mean it. You are so amazing! Like I really can't describe how proud I am of you!

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

True - you're right Lizzy - and that's my main goal is for realism and I'm excited about writing it I just wish readers had an open mind, I only lost maybe 3 readers here the other 5 sites that I have it posted to it's a hit or miss on any given day with a chapter upload but I am def thankful for the readers and their opinions, sadly a lot of them want romance and...they I dunno, I guess they still see hope in Harry. I'm excited to bring Dylan into the mix! He will be really fun to work with character wise I wasn't sure if I made Harry like I did in Sophia's POV I was really worried about that.