Sweet Desire - Comments, page 13

@softballchick79
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Ohhhh can't wait to see how this plays out, holly is lucky to have a great friend but I car wait to see what happens next...Louis seems determined!!

Treading into dangerous waters .....

@softballchick79
I know, not really a great move is it :/ xx

@not_any_maryjane
I love your comments :) there's something strange about Holly and hopefully Emily will realise Louis is just there for her. How will it go down between them? I can't say :)
But I'm confident you'll work it all out before I even update ;)
Xx

@KAOT
Yeah you're right, Louis isn't exactly taking into account at what message he's giving off to Holly,he's just so wrapped up in seeing Emily. Thank you for reading, been really enjoying your Niall story :) xx

@KAOT
Yeah you're right, Louis isn't exactly taking into account at what message he's giving off to Holly,he's just so wrapped up in seeing Emily. Thank you for reading, been really enjoying your Niall story :) xx

Asking one out to meet the friend .... Nothing good can come of that !

Did Holly pour her drink on Louis just to get to meet him? And maybe Emily didn't give him her number because she knows her friend fancies him... Either way, Louis is playing with fire xD But I love it! I love stories when they sound as proper boys and not philosophers undercover!!! xx

Just being able to read, love the last two chapters, I'm a bit concerned with how Louis went about getting together with Emily, I think Holly might make assumptions and think it's a date! Love this story!!

@audreydeville
Wow thank you :) I hope you continue to like it :) xx

@not_any_maryjane
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@not_any_maryjane
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@not_any_maryjane
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I adore this! I haven't read a good Louis story in so long! I need more xo

It's getting messy already! Yeah, I love it when it gets messy! xx

@Kitten2014
Oh that is so lovely of you! Thank you so much!! Xx

I made a second account so I could vote twice...I am loving this so far!

@Malina Tomlinson



@xRockMex

You are so welcome Love

@softballchick79
Haha! Thank you so much! I wish I was cool enough to give you a prize xx