Sweet Desire - Comments, page 11

So good! Can't wait to see what's next!

So good! Can't wait to see what's next!

@KAOT
Lol ;) xx

I knew the bad boy was to return! This is so good! I totally love it! ;) xx

@softballchick79
Oh noo :/ xx

Hell, I'm confused ......

@xRockMex
You can tell me, I'm really good at keepin secrets!! Lol.

I was wondering the same! People should ask for a criminal record before even kissing somebody these days! Can't wait to learn more!!! xx

@KAOT
Ohh I'm so tempted to say so much but I know I can't! Brilliant thinking! Love your thoughts completely, the truth with Gary and how she knows him will be revealed soon :) xx

Ohhhh! Is Gary Emily or Holly's brother?! I've been wondering about him...


Great chapter! I have so many questions/thoughts!!

Ohhhh is Gary Emily or Hollys brother? I've been wondering...

Good chapter! Leaves me with so many thoughts!!

@lovingharry123
;) shall have to see what happens xx

@xRockMex
I am hoping that Louis gets Emily!!

@not_any_maryjane We still don't know much about Holly yet though, most confident people still understand a brush off, is holly a psycho? X

@xRockMex
Don't be like this! Not every confident person is a potential psycho!!! xD xx

@mmcdade
Thank you so much :) xx

@not_any_maryjane @softballchick79

Holly is far too confident and even Louis doesn't know how to handle her. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback :) xx

I may have come late to the party, but I love this story SO much!!! x

Can we say psycho ?????

Oh, my God, Holly is a total psycho and Emily is in Stockholm syndrome mode! Poor Louis! He needs to return to his bad boy's ways quickly! xx