Constructive Criticism ahead with Bloody Reviews - Comments, page 2

@ChloeSpark
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@Niallers Nandos
there you go I've made you review it's pretty long though ^^

@ChloeSpark
Haha, that's ok, I was just asking.. :)

@Niallers Nandos
sure I'm at chapter 11 still have a few more to go ^^

@ChloeSpark
Oh and can u tell me when it's up?

@Beths_a_bae
Ok... will do


@ChloeSpark
And thanks.. haha, can't wait! :)

@esmiestyles
Sure I can :)

@Beths_a_bae
you're very welcome :)

could you do Princess please heres the link if you could do it http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/61632/Princess/

@Niallers Nandos
Message me !

@ChloeSpark
Thanks alot )

@Niallers Nandos

I've read a lot of reviews about Mistakes and I'm really looking forward to it :P after all I'm here to see what you can make better of a perfect story ^^ (that's what I heard at least :D)

@Beths_a_bae
Haha, yea we should.. that would be awesome. :3 totally... lol

@Beths_a_bae

I've posted your review, hope you find it worth it, if not juste tell me (well write I guess), and it's only to help you because I really enjoy your story ;)

@Niallers Nandos
Thanks...? Your is soo AMAZAYN FABULOUIS EXTRODIHARRY BRILLIUM AND PHENOMINIALL. ....I'm weird......we should write together sometime :)

@Beths_a_bae
Thanks...:) love your story 3am too :D

@ChloeSpark
Yay...THANKSSS. Also , Mistakes is awesome , you'll love it ! :)

@ChloeSpark
Thank you! :) can't wait!

@Niallers Nandos
sure no problem :)

@Beths_a_bae
I'll do it :) it was actually meant as joke but I like it ^^

Can you review my story 'Mistakes'..?? pleeeeeaasee