Constructive Criticism ahead with Bloody Reviews - Comments

Do you mind checking out my 5sos fanfic please(:?
If you dont do 5sos i totally understand

http://www.5secondsofsummerfanfiction.com/Story/62144/Touring-With-5-Seconds-of-Summer/

thanks for your time(:xx

can you review my story Visiting Hours??

heya! i'm needing a review for my story Cross Country, it would be great if you could

@Anobrxin
Xenophobia is up :)

Can you please review my story "bad boy is my roommate" there is only 1 chapter so far but chapter 2 will be up later today

Hey can you review my stories please they are a lot so im just gonna give you some of them
1. Obsession
2.Mistakes
3. Paid to kill
4. Loving a monster
Most of them are in the beginning so they are short.... Thanks and if you have time some day... my other stories (Im little pushy i know xp Sorry)

@esmiestyles
the review's up :)

@esmiestyles
the review's up :)

Whyyy

@esmiestyles
the review's up :)

@esmiestyles
the review's up :)

@WritingAddict55
Sure !!! :)

Can you review a fe of my stories?
Black & White
Line by Line
Hide & Seek
Wonder

thanks! :) x

@Anobrxin
Sure I'll do it as soon as I can :)

Can you review my two stories Xenophonia and Adoloscent ? (: xx

@Niallers Nandos
James broke his arm because of his mother's hitting, I think when Nicole tells Niall how she finds him at her Mom's and describes in what state he was :)

@ChloeSpark
That's ok, it was perfect, but who in the story did u see broke there arm and did take care of it? just curious, I don't remember that

@Niallers Nandos
hope it wasn't too much --' I just take notes as I'm reading ^^so does make a lot of them

@ChloeSpark
Haha, that's ok!!! i'm gonna read it now! :)

@Niallers Nandos
And I'm quite an idiot because I haven't proofread myself ^^