My Light - Comments, page 21

@Emmy2320
Happy birthday! :)

Love it

Yay an update on my birthday! Haha I am just so excited! And yes my birthday did fall over spring break, I got lucky. I really liked Nora's POV in this, it gives us more insight to her life and how much the flower shop means to her. Really liking this so far, of course! :)

@All-is-on

Thank you! It takes me a while to really figure out a good character for them, someone that will balance them yet challenge them at the same time. I want them to be someone that will be an equal and not just go along with whatever the guys say, so hopefully that comes across. I'm glad you're liking it so far, don't worry about Zayn being a stalker, he's just a little nervous. :)

@Emmy2320

Lucky! We have spring break next week! I can't wait! I'm glad you're liking the story so far! I'm excited for it, getting back into writing from the beginning again. :)

@mazza-mazza

Thank you! I love when you comment, you've been around for so long I'm really thankful that you've read my stories from the beginning! :)

@not_any_maryjane

Ah thanks! He's learning how to "start over" so it's a slight struggle for him. I appriciate all your feedback, thanks for all your help!! :)

@xRockMex

Thank you! I don't read a lot of Zayn stories either, my numbers kind of reflect the fact that other people don't read them either but I'm totally okay with it, it's only been a few days! :)

Loved that chapter! And the name Nora! And I noticed the incorporation of "Her hand fits in mine like it's made just just for me", even if it wasn't word for word. Have I ever told you how well you fit the personalities of your characters together? I mean really, they are just perfect for each other! Louis got someone responsible, Niall got someone sweet and organized (cause Lord knows he needed it) and although you usually pair them with someone who will balance them, so to speak, with the characteristic that is generally opposite them, I can see how Nora's creativeness will really complement Zayn's and will most likely inspire him later on! ;) And just missed this chapter when I read the first three! That was frustrating! Oh well, thank the Lord for email reminders! I'm really gettign into this! More please!

I love the name Nora for her, I think that it is such a fitting name for the little that we know about her so far! I can't wait to see where this story goes! I am really missing that extra hour of sleep right now! Luckily I have spring break this week so I can catch up! LOL. Have a great week!

I love the name Nora!! It's so delicate and classy...
I AM still here., quiet but still here because you always have me hooked from your first lines :)

I love the name Nora!! It's so delicate and classy...
I AM still here., quiet but still here because you always have me hooked from your first lines :)

Omg, the feels! I can't barely manage the feels! I think Nora is adorable. I love that she's a florist. And I love to see this sensible, shy Zayn. It's totally how I picture him! Great work, my friend! Can't wait to read more!!! xx

Ahh I love it! I have to admit I don't read many stories of Zayn but you're turning it around for me!! It feels so real and I'm really taking to him and Nora, can't wait for more xx

@All-is-on
Hopefully you stuck around just a little bit longer and read my update, she's been discovered! It is a bit depressing, I'll give you that, he's very somber, it's been difficult to write like that but maybe our MC will assist him. :) Thanks for reading!!

@EleanorRigby
Thank you! It's different to do a character like this but I'm hoping it will all work out...if it doesn't just reread Just As Much and think of it as my last story. Lol.

@Emmy2320
I know, right? Another adventure for us! Thanks so much for your vote of confidence! :)

@not_any_maryjane
Ah yay! You know this story wouldn't have happened without you!! Thanks for reading friend!

Aw! Zayn is just making me sad! He seems so lost! And I'm not really impressed with his choice of meeting her. Stalking is, well, creepy. Even if your stalker is none other than Zayn Malik. I hope he becomes happy! This story really has started off pretty depressing, but I know your writing so I really shouldn't be surprised! So far so good! I'm looking forward to finally meeting and puting a name to his mystery girl! I have a feeling it's not Lucia! Can't wait!

@mazza-mazza

Thanks! It's a bit of a risk to have a divorced, band over Zayn but I think I can make it work! Glad you're here reading with me! :)