My Light - Comments, page 19

@lovetodance95
Ah my first story is far from the best, keep that in mind!! In all about realistic endings, even if it upsets people. I'm glad you're enjoying awkward Zayn! I'm having fun writing him like that!!

@stylesgirl0201
Thank you!! I always try to just pretend I'm in the scene as far as describing it so I'm glad that other people can picture themselves in it as well!!

@All-is-on
Hahaha, I'm glad you like it! I always think that when you're first starting to get to know someone, you actually embarrass yourself quite a bit so that's how Zayn is being portrayed. Nora seems to break through his confident facade and he doesn't quite know how to handle it! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

So cute. Nora is interesting but I love her already. Hope your having/had a great trip to Miami!

Zayn is adorable at the end of the chapter... Keep writing it's really good so far! Can't wait for an update. = )

Awkward and a bit shy Zayn is so adorable. But he can be a courageous at times. I mean, it was him that invited her to lunch and came in the shop every day ;)

P.S. I'm continuing reading Give me love like this.
I've ruined it all by seeing a comment that said they do not end up together, ahhh. But that won't stop me from reading on :)

Once again, you never fail to let me down. I absolutely love every chapter you write. I feel as if I am actually sitting in the flower shop watching it all unfold. Keep up the incredible work!

Ah!! I'm SOOOOO excited for their date!! The things that Zayn thinks sometimes just crack me up!! I mean, he can be just so scattered and, well, uncool. It's flat out hilarious!! 'That one place'. Wow. What a great answer. His point of view has me smiling because he's hilarious and because his thoughts are just so damn adorable!! I mean, 'Maybe I'll be the best part of her day' just made me melt!! What I wouldn't give to have a guy think about me like that, let alone Zayn Malik!! I think I'm REALLY going to like this story, although I can't shake the feeling that it's going to end on as good of a note as JAM. I have a feeling it's going to end up more like the endings to your other stories. I'm just glad they seem to be moving faster than Niall and Erica did. I mean, that story was thirty chapters in and we still hadn't gotten anything except for romantic thoughts from them. Anyways, I'm just so happy with where this story has gone so far! Can't wait for more!

@All-is-on
They are quite possible too cute, lol, but you never know how long it will last. :) Go to school in London! It will be difficult to be far away but I would totally go back and do it if I could! Thanks so much for reading, hopefully you like the update!!

@lovetodance95
Hahaha, sure!! I have friends at school from west of Miami and they tried to get me to go last year but I didn't so I decided this year was the year! By the time I drive home it's only like a 45 minute flight to Miami so might as well!!

@not_any_maryjane
You are the nicest person ever! Your comment just made my life, not even my day, but life. :)

@Emmy2320
Hahaha, wondering if anyone had caught that! I'll probably get sunburnt with my luck, lol. Thanks for reading on your week off!!

@njrotcgurl243
Yay! That makes me so happy! :)

Ugh!! That was just too cute to handle!!! That just made me insanely happy!! And when she said she would be worried about going to England because she would sleep with any guy with an accent!! I've had the exact same thought! I've always wanted to go to college in London and then I thought about that and an like, hmmm, maybe that's not the best idea!! And also 'I wonder if he knows how awkward he is at times.' was too great!!! And he knows her schedule!! That's too sweet! I really do feel like he'd be that really observant person that actually pays close attention to you and remembers things about you instead of just listening and forgetting. And the last line is great! 'Oh I'll teach you a thing or two.' And I'm THRILLED for their date!! It's going to be soooo exciting!! Ah!! More please!!!

What a lovely update! Excited much about theit lunch out!

Wow Miami, girl? Take me with ya, will ya?

When things are perfect I lost my ability to express myself and I just want to cry. Dear, I don't think you realise how much you have grown as a writer :) xx

Ahhh these two are cute! I love how you have written Zayn so far in this book! And I also loved the passing thought Zayn had of Erica and Niall being married. So sneaky! Lol
Unfortunately not doing anything too exciting this week off. Mostly working on homework, fun I know. Though we do have family coming into town this weekend to celebrate mine and my brothers birthday (which is two days before mine) so should be a good weekend. Your break sounds like a lot of fun!

@not_any_maryjane
Thank You!

@not_any_maryjane
Thank You!

Love it