Behind Enemy Lines - Comments, page 5

Awweee what a sad but happy chapter. I loved it like usual and I teared up a little when Ash was talking to Hayley before her and Cal left. It was sad. Then at the end of the chapter, I smiled because of how cute Cal and Hayley are together. I figured she would run away so that they could be together without having to worry about Ryder or her dad. I'm glad they didn't get caught because I would've been so sad. Hayley's dad probably would have made Ryder and Hayley get married then and there.(Once again, glad that didn't happen.) Amazing chapter, as always, and I can't wait for the next.

Ahh! I died reading this chapter!

this is so good!!! good luck with vball ; )

@fluffy5sos
can't wait :)

yay thanks so much!!!!!!! *hugs*

@fluffy5sos
YAAAAASSSSSS

@AshtonIsBae
@Luke's girl98
@GabbyB


Im working on it right now!! :)

bro, I can't believe he suggested to run away. I really can't wait to see what she says

please update soon! this chapter was amazing, as usual :)

This is so good please update soon!!! ;)

Jesus Christ. Poor Hayley! Poor Calum!

this is so good please update soon! ; )

@fluffy5sos
Thanks, but your system confuses me so I get where your coming from

@Mrs. Hood
Sorry! I'm from america! We only have 4 years of highschool.
freshman year- when you're 14-15
sophomore- 15-16
junior- 16-17
senior- 17-18

i tried to make the story as accurate as possible, but tbh your school system comfuses me

@fluffy5sos
Yea I would too

There 5 years in high school form year 7 up to year 11

There 5 years in high school form year 7 up to year 11

@Maria Clifford
Yeah but think about it, he's this dangerous gang member who is t scared to harm her ya know? I'd be scared if I were her

It's 2014 I think she has a choice I cant believe her father

Omg tHis is so good please update siin