Behind Enemy Lines - Comments, page 4

LUKE NO!!!!!!!!!

This is so good, please update soon!!!! ; )

just read 16.... awesome. plze update. plze. i need this story to survive

OMG twins. thats awesome. a little part of me wants the drama but a little bit doesnt. yea drama, just dont make her get hurt, please. that wuld kill me.

My parents worried about me when I read this chapter because I was freaking out(with joy, screaming "twins!!") and all this shizness and I got sent to my room for being loud. Whoops!!

OMGGGGG!!!!! THIS IS SOOO F-ING CUUUTE!!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON CUZ IM FREAKINGGG!!!!

I seriously screamed 'twins!' when the doctor told her! haha i love how cute Calum is with her and how happy he is about having a family. I just think the whole thing is soooooo adorable! Please update soon! :)

;)

@fluffy5sos
Yeah, I commented before I read ch. 14

@AshtonIsBae
Hahaha thank you:) when I read the "if Calum leaves her" part I was like wait did she read chapter 14?

@fluffy5sos
oh yeah, I read it. Amazeballs chapter as usual. =D

Did you read it? @AshtonIsBae hahaha

Holy shit. The test is positive. If Calum leaves her, I swear.

@fluffy5sos
AWWEEE thanks!!!!

@Maria Clifford
Romeo and Juliet frustrated me cause like if they only waited another second then they would both be alive!!! So I wasn't really trying to of for the r+j type thing haha

Oh my god I was not expecting this. Did anybody else think they were going to end up like Romeo & Juliet?

She should name the boy or girls after their old friends

Awwww. I teared up with the last chapter:,( And why am I scared to see how Calum reacts with the next chapter;) lol

OMG that plot twist!!!! happy calum, twins?..... this story is so good so please udate soon!

@AshtonIsBae
Aww thank you!! That made me so happy!!
I woke up early (it's like5:30) to work on it for you guys!

Lots of love:)
fluffy5sos