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Reviews <3 - Comments, page 3

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Can you please, review my story, All Because of a Rose?

Sarah_Tran Sarah_Tran
10/16/14

Cigarettes In Your Coffee

elasticheart. elasticheart.
10/16/14

Breakeven

WritingAddict55 WritingAddict55
10/16/14

@ScarletCanBurn
I'm so sorry I've been busy with exams! Your review will be up in a few! <3

Telichia xxx Telichia xxx
10/16/14

@Telichia xxx
Oh my gosh really?? That makes me so happy!! Thank you!! :) xx

xXKaleighStyles57Xx xXKaleighStyles57Xx
10/14/14

Do I not get one anymore :(

ScarletCanBurn ScarletCanBurn
10/14/14

My phone wouldn't let me put the link so, Better than words by Irish_snowflakes!

Irish_Snowflakes Irish_Snowflakes
10/14/14

@KaleighStyles57
TBH I'm already a subscriber to both and I've voted for them too.. I'm in love with Breathe <3<3<3 I'll do the review anyway :)

Telichia xxx Telichia xxx
10/14/14

Could you review my story my story Breathe (1st Book), and my new one Change?? That would mean the world to me :) You could just click on my profile and both books are in there. Thank you so much :) xx

xXKaleighStyles57Xx xXKaleighStyles57Xx
10/13/14

@Telichia xxx
No worries :)x

ScarletCanBurn ScarletCanBurn
10/13/14

Half Moon Ranch maybe? The link is in my profile

shutyomouth shutyomouth
10/13/14

@ohsugar.
@raylee
All done <3

@ScarletCanBurn
Give me 5 minutes! )

Telichia xxx Telichia xxx
10/13/14

Please will you review my story Notorious :)

ScarletCanBurn ScarletCanBurn
10/13/14

Thank you baby!!

Missesonedirection94 Missesonedirection94
10/13/14

I've only just started it but a small review on Black & Blue would be amazing! I reslly wanna work hard on it but I'm worried its something people might not read xx

chocolate. chocolate.
10/13/14

Would you please review The death of me?

raylee raylee
10/13/14

@Telichia xxx
Okay I'll add those details into a chapter

Niallsgirl1 Niallsgirl1
10/13/14

@Niallsgirl1
I think both babe. but you should let her express her feelings more. write more about her thoughts. Like how she feels about what her boyfriend did to her (made her walk home that's why she's there in the first place right?) then her thoughts about being away from her friends and family.. Her emotions towards that.. and how she feels about missing out on her Daily life.. then what she thinks might happen to her. and make her pay attention to everything around her.. like the colour and shapes of things.. then what she think of how the boys look, behave and act towards her. I think if you want, make her pick a favorite.. if I was you I would make Zayn her Favorite cause he's nice to her

oh, and maybe make her think of ways to escape ;)
once you've done that let me know and I'll review it for you again <3

Telichia xxx Telichia xxx
10/13/14

She isn't sure how to feel. Scared, depressed or?

Niallsgirl1 Niallsgirl1
10/13/14

@Telichia xxx


Kk thanks bb!!

Missesonedirection94 Missesonedirection94
10/13/14