When I'm Gone - Comments, page 20

@Emmy2320

You'll know them! Nothing crazy, she's not from the mafia or anything like that. :) And yes, she's trying not to let her attraction show!

@Kitten2014

All will be explained...lol. Kind of in this chapter but you get the full story in the next chapter which I'll post tomorrow!! Promise! :)

Omg I love this story the way you writer there's just something that makes me want to keep reading and never stop please continue I love this :)

wow this is getting really good!!!
I really enjoy reading this story, i like how the main charcter, Kate has morals and dignity, yes she has an attraction to Louis(well who dosen't) but she isn't throwing herself at him, or trying to steal him away from Eleanor. Instead she keeps on telling herself he's taken so don't try anything..

i adore Eleanor but in this story she acting so petty, really only giving Louis a month to engage her or she's leaving.... I'm like go ahead and leave then he can be free to be with kate:)
last thought- i really enjoy olivia, even though she has cancer she still is happy and carefree:), i feel bad that she dosen't have a father in her life.... ok im done, please update .. thx & bye xx

Ugh I want to know her secrets! I want to know! I like how she is trying not to like Louis but yet she does and she is excited to see him. This is getting interesting!

Great update! Wonder what Kate is hiding...

@Emmy2320

Thank you! I always love your comments, they're very encouraging!!

I love the way you are showing Eleanor in this story even though I am sure she doesn't act like that actually. I am glad that you will keep on with the story because I think it is great!

@Emmy2320

I'm glad it's nothing like you've ever read! That's what I was hoping for!! :) Hopefully you continue to like it!!

@liamsgurl

Thank you!! I'm glad the characters emotions are showing through to everyone, hopefully not too many tears during this story!

@mazza-mazza

YAY! I'm so glad you started reading it and like it!! I did say it was going to be different! :)

@not_any_maryjane

Very true! Sometimes it's nice to have a story that isn't about kidnapping, sex slaves, and high school bad boys too. lol. :)

Ugh this is just heartbreaking but so good. It is like nothing I have ever read, just like all of your other stories. Thank You for working so hard on your stories. They really are great. I can't wait to see where you are going with this story.

I love this story you dont see much stories with cancer involed. Its very brave of you to do this. Im expecting lots of tears as the story progresses. I hope Olivia gets better. You're an amazing writer and im glad you came up with this idea.

Oh my day!! I have just read all the first 8 chapters and I am more than hooked!!!

I loved Mandolin Rain and you knew it but girl you did wonders with this amazing new story!!! Way to go!!

It is sad to read about Olivia's condition but you have it the nail and managed to make it realistic and I am not going to lie but I cried a little in the last chapter!!!

Finally Louis and Kate meet again :) I really like their interactions! She is such a strong woman!!

Well, I think it's very brave of you bringing this subject. Why can we use fanfiction as a platform to speak about meaningful things and try to create awareness towards it? Bone narrow donation saves lives as Olivia's. I liked all your stories till now, and I already know I'm going to suffer with this but thank you for shaking us.

@Emmy2320

Kate has been through a lot, we'll learn more about her struggles and thoughts as the story continues but she's very guarded with them, rightfully so. And hopefully you continue to enjoy reading it!

@not_any_maryjane

This is a very emotional story for me to write, it's unlike any I've done before, I'm hoping, if I can pull it off, in the end everything will come together.

@Kitten2014

Thank you! I hope you like the update, explains everything just a little more.

I had a feeling that was coming but oh no poor Olivia! And Kate just losing her husband and now having a sick child. Wow. So good can't wait to see what happens.