When I'm Gone - Comments, page 18

@not_any_maryjane
Well thank you! I'm hoping to too this because I can't end it at chapter 14! Lots left planned to work through. And it will be good for Louis, he's got a rather large internal struggle.

I really enjoy this story! I can tell Louis is very conflicted but with the way Eleanor is acting he should give her one more chance to back off about the engagement thing or just leave. Then hopefully she would leave and he could finally be with Kate because that would just be ideal. I also hope this happens soon so Kate and Olivia can be happy and with Louis.

I really admire Kate for telling Louis she can't see him anymore, even though she obviously likes him. That says a lot about her that she is willing to give up what she wants for him. He clearly is trying to do the right thing and be with Eleanor but he still likes Kate, he can't help it. I don't think that kiss was a mistake I think it solidified to Louis that he should be with Kate not Eleanor. Wow this story is so good and so complex, it really makes me think. Thanks for an update, have fun this weekend. Sorry this comment is so long! :)

@KAOT
YES!!!

@KAOT
YES!!!

I absolutely love this story <3

@KAOT
Things are getting complicated around here... I can picture the mess in Louis' head. Well, I don't really know if you could manage to top this because this is superb and we are just in chapter 14, but you could try, and surprise us ;)

We definitely should start that club! Like a gentlemen club. I'm fancying it already! Can't wait for your next update. x

@Emmy2320

I didn't leave you like that, I promise! This chapter kind of goes hand in hand with the previous one so I felt the need to post it too. And yes, I think Louis would be fantastic with Olivia, I mean it helps that he's the oldest to so many siblings! :)

@breadboy101

Yes! I wanted to make sure Louis made the move for that kiss. Even though we know Kate is attracted to Louis and has some feelings for him, we also know that she doesn't want to be "that girl", he made the move for the second kiss as well. :)

@louisliamzayn1dniallharry

Thanks! That chapter has been one of my favorites, I couldn't wait to share it!

@ONE DIRECTION LOVE

Louis and Eleanor? We shall find out soon enough!! :)

@not_any_maryjane

For sure start a club!! And I'm just a wee bit nervous that if I make any other stories after this one they will pale in comparison with all the Louis and Kate emotion!!

@llzhn1d

Thanks! I think I did well...we'll find out soon enough. EEks!

Oh my gosh! I can't believe you are just going to leave us like this! So not okay! But I mean finally! It was coming for so long, the chemistry is just there between them! Love, love, love this chapter, I could so picture Louis being so adorable with Olivia. :)

OMG!!! they kissed:)
im really glad that it was louis who inciated the kiss and not kate
im really excited to see what happens next!!... i kinda feel bad that i want eleanor to disapper so louis can be with kate.
update asap,

Wow that was great! I love this story so much. I can't believe anyone would give you hate on this. Also I can't wait to see what happens with Louis and Eleanor! I just want her out of the picture so he can be with Kate.

Oh my god they kissed!! I so was that coming ;) what happens with Eleanor and Louis tho?? Plz update soon love the story

@KAOT
I don't really know what's going on inside people's head when they decide to hate, especially harmless, meaningful stories as this one, because love is always more powerful. Look at those 24 votes! I'm so glad to have stories around here finally speaking about things that matter! We definitely should start a club. We should!

The feels are killing me still! Loved the update :) Can't wait for more!!!

This update was great! good luck on your midterms!!

@not_any_maryjane

I don't mind a little constructive criticism at all, I just keep getting these amazing comments them out of nowhere my ratings drop so I just don't get it! But in the end I'm just glad so many people like my stories and let me know. :) Annnddd I'd like a story update from you. :)