When I'm Gone - Comments, page 17

@breadboy101

Thank you! I love Louis and Eleanor in real life too but obviously to make a story I couldn't just have him be with El! :) Although I wish they were out in public more, love seeing their pictures. Hope you enjoyed the new chapter!

You're as busy as a bee, updating so often!
I love your story for being different. You're one of the few people who challenge their readers and offer more than flat characters and nothing but happiness. Keep it that way and I'll stay with you until the very end. :)

Great update...please continue! If I could vote every day I would!!!!

This story is so great!! Please don't stop writing it!!!

@KAOT
You have to continue writing this story, i don't always comment but i absolutely love it!!!
I feel really bad for olivia i think its sad for such a young person to have to go thru something so terrible as cancer:(
on the otherhand i am very pleased with the way kate and louis clearly can't get enough of each other:) I think they are really cute, and would be awesome together.

I really hope that Louis ends things with eleanor, I adore her in real life but in the story she is too complainly and louis needs to drop her!!

anyways update asap bye xx

@not_any_maryjane
Very true! His character is very much afraid of new things and new adventures, he's very comfortable with where he's at and not used to a change such as with his relationships. We shall see what he chooses.

Thanks as as always for your lovely comments! Very excited to have a talented writer such as yourself reading my story. :)

@Kitten2014
Probably one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me about my writing! Thank you so much! It's nice to know that what I'm trying to say is actually being understood like that. Hope it continues like that!

@KAOT
Yes, I know what you mean and I respect you a lot for that :) Most people use these things just to add drama but to you it's the core of your story. But life is stranger than fiction and even in the darkest times, there is still hope––sorta quoting Gandalf there ;) And if Louis thinks he could mend his relationship proposing, well, he'll just make things worse, as Zayn pointed out to him. But again, we tend to take things too far just because of inertia or because we are scared to hurt people you love.

Can't wait to your next update! I should do the same and run to answer my comments xD xx

Wow...just wow! Those last two chapters were heartbreaking. You have a gift for writing and making me feel exactly what the characters are feeling. Can't wait for more

@not_any_maryjane

Thank you. I'm researching quite a bit to make it realistic, I'm not a fan of stories that are "serious" but completly unrealistic!

@Emmy2320

It was a super hard chapter to write! Very emotional, but plenty of story to be written and glimmers of hope to be had. :)

OMG, this is so heartbreaking! But we knew about the seriousness of her disease :( You are very brave carrying on with this subject realistically.

No no no no no no no!!!!!!!!!! This is not okay on any level, at all, what so ever. I nearly started crying. That is just like I don't even know, ugh!!!!! She can't die!!!!! I will be so so sad!!!!! That is so heartbreaking. Thanks for updating again but for real I need another update like five minutes ago! I need to know!

@llzhn1d

Today! Right now! And thank you!! Hope you like the new post!

@not_any_maryjane

Oh, please don't die, I need to know the rest of your story! :)

When are you updating? I need to read this story!! It's so good!!

Not to pressure but if you don't update I might die <3 xx

@louisliamzayn1dniallharry
Thank you!! Louis is for sure stuck between a rock and a hard place. Things won't get worked out right away, of course but hopefully we can stick it out and it will work out!

@Emmy2320
It will get more complex soon! And I love you long comment, it hit the nail on the head about louis is struggling! Wedding was super fun, but still away from my computer for a few more days!

@konzy321
Awe, thank you, I'll be updating soon!!