Mandolin Rain - Comments, page 3

Oh no!!!!! Luna can't be gone :( So sad about it!!!

Loved it once again and I agree with you your portrait of Harry seems really accurate and for once respectful :)

@njrotcgurl243

YAY! Thanks for letting me know, I hope you continue to like it!!

@mazza-mazza

I know, right? Everyone portrays Harry in this bad light but I think he would actually be really sweet so I'm trying to make him come across like that. I see its working. :)

I love this story

Oh it is so sad :( Don't want them separated!!!
Harry is so cute it is almost sickening!!! Why can't they all be like him?!?!?

Thank you so much for the shout out! I love love that story!!!

Snappy Harry is mean... But I love how he looks up to her and respects her. Elliott has had such a good and huge impact on him.

Regarding that Louis story can't wait! I loved your first story, I adore Mandolin Rain and I am sure I am going to love the next one :)

@mazza-mazza


Yay! And yes a Louis story...I thought of it a few days ago and haven't seen one like it so I thought I'd give it a go. Hopefully I can pull it off. I just wrote the first chapter so I need to write more and finish this story before I post it but hopefully soon! Even though we still have a little ways to go with this story first. :)

Oh she is so adorable!! I love how she treats him for his birthday!!! And that kitten <3
Love love that chapter!!

A Louis story?? Can't wait!!!!!! More details please!!! :)

@mazza-mazza

Thanks! Got the intro done at least so I figure thats good enough. hahah. Glad you like it, more drama to come thats for sure. :)

Theg are perfect for each other: both love to tease... Elliott shouldn't keep this secret from Harry! It's too big of a deal!
I loved this update! Thank you!
Good luck with your paper!!

Oh!!!!! He asked her :) I am so happy she said yes!! He is so caring for her that it is so heart warming!!! Loved these last two chapters as usual :)

@mazza-mazza

Aww thanks!!! I struggled writing those two chapters because I didn't want Elliot to just be the girl that gives in and takes him back asap, he's gonna work for it. :)

Yeah they are back "together"!!! Loved this natural but needed conversation!! So realistic once again!!

@mazza-mazza

Thanks! Glad to be back. :)



@Emmy2320

Yay! Hope you continue to like it!

So good! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh no Rain :( I feel bad for her... Harry finally told the truth but we all know that sometimes it hurts...
Happy to have you back :)

Oh oh this doesn't look good... Hopefully we will get more answers soon :) Once again I loved the update!!

Ohhhhhhh shit

Thank you for updating! I really enjoyed this chapter! It was sad that Harry left, but it was still very good! :) I can't wait for more! Xo

@mazza-mazza

Glad you like them!



@not_any_maryjane

Thanks! I love a lot of stories on here, just wanted one semi realistic!



@Morgan_Who
Thanks for reading! Hope you like the new chapter too!