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Story Reviews - Comments, page 7

Can you please review my stories: "Love Me For Me", "You Found Me", "Change Your Life", and "Here We Go". If you don't have time to review them all, I would really appreciate it if you reviewed the first one. Thank you!

CallMeBri CallMeBri
7/2/14

@mattyOMG
your review is up (~'-')~

JordynHoran JordynHoran
7/2/14

Can you please review my story, Love At First Type? honesty is appreciated x

@DrowningButBreathing
Like you made Niall like food extremely.
Or those stories where Louis has an extreme obsession with carrots (thank god you didn't put that though

I'm sure he likes food but not that much lol ;)

Other than those small things I pointed out your story is excellent! keep writing!

JordynHoran JordynHoran
7/2/14

Thanks but what does carrot-y mean?

@DrowningButBreathing
Your review is up! =D

JordynHoran JordynHoran
7/2/14

@JordynHoran
Can you review mine and @XxBriannaxX's story, Good Enough? Thanks.

@JordynHoran

Yep, that's exactly what's happening. :P
So change the too much spacing and the not enough spacing, gotcha. I'll try to even them out :)

Polka_Dot Polka_Dot
7/2/14

@One_Direction_Infection
Np that's what I'm here for!

I noticed you had different authors on your story so I think one person is adding a lot of spaces and then the other person didn't any spacing, but I think that's what's happening not anyone's POV in particular. =D

JordynHoran JordynHoran
7/2/14

@JordynHoran

Thanks! :)
Is it Racheal's Pov that you're talking about? With all the spaces?
And Skylar's Pov with no spaces?

I'll definitely add more emotions, thanks for pointing that out

Polka_Dot Polka_Dot
7/2/14

@One_Direction_Infection
your review is up =)

JordynHoran JordynHoran
7/2/14

Can you review my story The Hitman? Thanks!

Or Nah...Zayn Or Nah...Zayn
7/2/14

Can you review my story Plunge? Thanks :)

@mcalanna22
thanks ;) I'll do that!

JordynHoran JordynHoran
7/2/14

can you review my story, Alter?

svmmertime svmmertime
7/2/14

Can you review Fallen Angels?

hey, quick suggestion. tag the story in your review!!!

mcalanna22 mcalanna22
7/2/14

Could you review my story "Stripper Secrets?" Thank you!

@raylee
your review is up :)

JordynHoran JordynHoran
7/1/14