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Dreaming Of You // If I'm Still Dreaming - Comments, page 6
@lovetodance95
Haha You remembered Louis. Poor guy, he's like a collateral damage in this whole mess, but you know, he's far more involved in past and present even than anyone could think, especially Harry, but also Jeanne. Unfinished businesses are complicated for everyone, reaching far more than the two people directly involved. We'll see how crazy it plays out! Hang on to your chair! <3 xx
@Morgan__Who
Omg Morgan I couldn't believe it when I read it! Like, such surrealism. I hope everything's mended by now, so you can keep your schedule (and get your peace of mind too.) It's unbelievable what bad weather can do sometimes. I have my mind with those poor Haitian people, as if they didn't have enough. Nature can be ruthless. We have to take care of our planet a little better. I hope everyone's fine in your town. sounds like you had a nice time in spite of it all. And now much more is coming! Have fun my dear!
It's nice to write Jeanne though it's extremely difficult for me, having written the story 99% from Harry's POV. But anyway, all these chapters have been difficult to write, because I'm getting to the peak of the story. Any moment now the bomb is dropping! So don't even blink or you might miss it! ;) Thank you for being so lovely, my dear, supporting this madness for so long. It means the world to me. I hope you are doing great! <3 xx
@KAOT
I know! But lately it's taking so much work to write. These chapters are really complicated and I've been thinking about them for so long... I have to feel they're true to what's in my heart! I love to write my vulnerable Jeanne because she hasn't been like that even if inside she's a softie. Oh man, I thought I'd never arrive to the time I got to show how a complex and madly in love of a character she is. Thank you for being with me every step of it!
As for Niall shut up. You've seen solo!Niall! ;) <3 xx
@LivinLikeLarry
Hahaha I guess the chapter worked ;) You are a sunshine and it always makes me happy to get your comments! <3 xx
@xRock_Mex
Yeah, she's a tough girl, and just a few things can affect her, Harry being one of them. She manages to dissimulate very well, we'll see for how long. Harry's always confused, but maybe he'll get to a clear in the woods. Maybe some pieces of the puzzle are all that's missing! Thank you so much my friend for reading this story with such caring. I means a lot to me!!! <3 xx
@Harry'sAngelboo
I know it's not easy to understand why she thinks she's a negative influence for Harry. but remember how vulnerable and mad he was when he told her about his struggle. Maybe if he wasn't a drama king she wouldn't have freaked out about it :O But he had his reasons to spill things like that, so he couldn't help himself. I guess the tension's rising! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3 xx
@blankspace1
Thank you! You are so sweet! Your comments always have me beaming. I work a lot to put real feelings so I'm glad you enjoy my writing. A lot more is coming so hang on to your chair! <3 xx
Ahhh, it took me so long. There was too much stuff going on xD
I could totally picture Jeanne sitting on the bench, a bit away from the other guests. And when Louis stepped in. It was like a dream. The way you wrote this chapter. Perfection.
Poor guy is in love with Jeanne. Well, who isn't xD It's easy to love her. Such a noble lady she is. But there are different types of love. Louis will find love of his life. Or has he already? ;)
I'm so happy you decided to give us Jeane's pov here. So many confessions were made in this chapter. Looking back isn't always good, but having unfinished business is crap. Especially if it's love. So let's see what's on Harry's mind now... Look forward! <3
Hello lovely! Thank you for writing this chapter! Again, I meant to read this chapter earlier, but life has been pretty hectic! Have I told you how much I love Jeanne's POV? It makes her seem more real, and I always like her better after hearing her thoughts :) And there were some awesome instances where Jeanne's feminist side came out!!! I love it, and I love how she loves Harry!!! Next chapter sounds like it will be sufficiently awkward :) I love it!!!
I'm glad that this story brings a smile to my face every time it read it. I really need it in this stressful time. Warning, what I am about to tell you is a little depressing. I am keeping positive though. I have a D in AP Biology, Homecoming got postponed (I'll tell you that story in a minute), and because of the thing that postponed Homecoming, the auditorium where my drama play is happening (in about a month), is in bad condition. On Wednesday night, a torrential downpour of rain began in my little town. It rained all night, the next morning, and throughout the rest of the day Thursday! A two hour school delay was issued for Thursday morning, and around 8 o'clock I received word that there wouldn't be any drama practice that afternoon because flooding had affected the auditorium. I didn't see the extent of this damage until 2 hours later when my Computer Science teacher put a picture of the auditorium on the Smart Board. The entire front row was underwater. But of course the rain didn't stop. This of course caused flash flooding, which led to school being let out two hours early! Crazy day huh! The next day we got off the whole day of school! That meant that the football game would have to be postponed. That meant the dance would be postponed, so now it's October 21! Oh well! I'm safe! The flooding didn't really get to out where I live, but my poor boyfriend (who lives in town) ran into some detours! That's where I'm at right now! On the bright side, I still went to my friends house (our whole group did) and we still dressed up (I didn't wear my actual homecoming dress, it was my Easter one this past year (short, with lace, and a coral color) with some boots :) I still had a blast! Today was good, especially because I could read your story!!! Thanks again! Goodnight! Xoxo
Oh man!! Update tomorrow then? :) It's been a while since I've had to wait for a chapter, you always send me them! Of course, I'm spoiled. But this chapter! I know it's hard to write Jeanne but I love her self talk. Not letting her emotions show, and just how much Harry gets to her. Not just sometimes but like all the time how he gets to her.
And I only saw him from across the tee box a few times! I'll be watching footage sometime to see if I made it on the screen. I'm trying to talk dad into going to France in two years...
Ahhhhh talk about arriving just in time! Oh Jeanne. .if only she could understand that she isn't the negative force in his life.. he's what she needs. I love her though, she's always thinking of others but yet pushes her needs aside. I like how strong minded she is, to not feel emotion at a wedding is a strong point and I loved it.
Harry is still a dream in this story - You know how much I love him ♡ Your words are beautiful in every way. Thank you for updating. . I know it takes a lot of your time and effort but it's so worth it ♡xx
TBH don't know y she is like this like , H is really nice guy . y is she in such denial , really want to see them together .
Oh, holy moly! This chapter was very emotional and beautifully detailed (once again, it's amazed me). It's a huge secret Jeanne is keeping from Harry and I can only imagine what his reaction is going to be when he finds out! Your writing takes my breath away but I will regain it when you update again ;) xx
@Morgan__Who
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and don't worry. It's not important when you get to read it. I know you are a busy girl. A lot will be going on from now on. As I said it could happen any time so don't drop your guard with this story. And you like the drama so we'll get more drama and misunderstanding, because I love that. And I'm glad people that read this story enjoy it. There's this idea in fic that someone has to be the bad person, but misunderstanding is a far more better and more realistic (beside fairer) resource for drama in my humble opinion. We can write fic without resorting on absolute evil because that's not generally how life is.
Anyway, I'm so excited about your party and your plans. I bet you'll have the time of your life. Seize the moment and have fun. Your dress sounds dreamy, and I'm sure your boyfriend will match you in handsomeness. I'm very excited for the both of you. I know these are important traditions in the US. You'll cherish those memories for years. Hope everything turns great. And while you do all that amazing things, I'll be here listening Niall's solo single while reading Harry's Another Man's issue. God bless. Thank you for being so lovely, M. It means a lot to me <3 xx
@LivinLikeLarry
Weddings have a will of their own! And they're tend to be evil lol There's always something. I know that too well so why not bring it to fic to? Everything's too perfect on fic, and it bores me. Let's bring some failure and issues, even if they're not the end of the world. I find things that are not perfect way more endearing :) I'm glad you could relate and enjoyed. I hope no one got sick at your cousin's wedding (because I know that happens too) Thank you for the support! <3 xx
@lovetodance95
Yeah, I know that family-like part was a low punch :D You know I like to push Harry in every possible way, so those cute moments are there for some reason, not only to gush about them ;) And yes, he's becoming more aware of how he's been dealing with Jeanne since he met her. Maybe he'll finally listen...
By the way, where are you? Niall dropped a single and I didn't get a word from you! Did the dentist abduct you? I hope not! Let me know how much you liked it and how you're doing, OK? Thank you for always being so lovely, baby. <3 xx
@not_any_maryjane
You're so sweet my friend, but please know your writing is on another level it's so outstanding I'm usually lost for words when you write! Happy to be back, it's about time I returned and do what I love :) I'll always support you wherever I am.
Your story touches me in so many ways - a true genius.
You mean a lot to me too my friend - I'm always here! ♡xx
@xRock_Mex
I'm glad you like it, my friend. I know this story and my writing style's not everyone cup of tea, so I appreciate your words very much. Happy to have you back, Chels. I know there's a time for everything, but it's good to see you back at writing. Thank you for the support and the love. You mean a lot to me <3 xx
Oh my god!! Liam and Louis... I can't believe he did that! I don't want to write too much as I do not want to spoil it for other readers incase they see comments. But I didn't see that coming at all. But I love how Harry always feels that remorse and always has the mind and gentle heart - he can't stay angry or nasty. I know he's confused. I know he's hanging on to her but he's not getting what he needs. It doesn't matter though because the way you have written this chapter is absolutely brilliant!
One of my fave chapters so far my friend - I bloody love it!! ♡♡♡XXX
10/9/16