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Dreaming Of You // If I'm Still Dreaming - Comments, page 28
@Vanilla.
My lovely! Thank you! I'm excited because you are excited about this new stage! I'm updating in half an hour, if the site let me upload the chapter! You never know! Thank you so much for reading and your support. It means a lot! xx
@boltofblu
How much I love my clever, clever readers! :D In fact we'll have Jimmy around, as I love him with such passion, as much as his wife and Drew. I want to bring all the people I love from Hollywood to this story. I'm quite excited about it! I think Paris was great and sexy but we were needing a change, so I'm glad we are all in the same page!
The answers we want will come along basically in the first ten chapters, but you know my ways, I don't like to rush in :D I couldn't say everything in just one chapter! I have a whole story to write! :D But we'll get there. I hope you like it though. It's not easy to write as I carry 77 chapters on my shoulders and all the new challenges. The possibility of being the father never crossed his mind because he knows it's impossible. Her mere existence absolutely changes the rules between Harry and Jeanne so it'll be interesting to see how the bonding progresses! It's so good to have you here, lovely! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Your feedback really makes the difference! xx
@EleanorRigby
I'll catch a train to your town and spank you in your little ass, dear xD Jeanne not using condoms with Harry was an exception! The chapter that prefigures Lara is chapter 64! Of course in order to get pregnant you can't use a condom so she didn't use it with someone else, apparently, hahaha. Well, first we have to know who's the lucky guy. Such evil pending on Harry!
I'm glad to have you back in team Harry. I was feeling lonely here! I hope you don't leave this time, as I plan to have him all grown up for a little while ;D Or even for a long while, who knows? We'll get to know everything about his process throughout the story, as this is a story about him developing himself. Jeanne is, I could say, the engine, even though she'll have a bigger part in the sequel. I needed to take her from his imagination and make her real, in order to really become real to him, because she has always been this puzzle for him, this creature, but hardly a real person. Let's see if it works now!!! <3 xx
@Love_Life
Hello, my sweet! I'm glad I surprised you! I'm aware you weren't expecting such a huge twist, so I'm happy that you are still here! We'll get more answers as the story develops, as you know how I like to disclose information in my story, very slowly :) But Harry is about to turn 25. This story is set in 2019. He knows he's not the father because Jeanne and him had sex for the last time in November, 2014, and when he saw her in April, 2015, she wasn't pregnant at all. She got pregnant around December 2016. Harry is always the father, except in my story :D
Well, Lara is fairly young to speak any language, but her mother speaks to her in French, so she understands French. But language learning is so great that such a young child could basically understand any language just because of the tones. But I bet she'll get a bit confused over codes :) Thank you for reading for so long, my friend! Hoping to keep you interested! <3 xx
@Morgan_Who
My dear! I missed you so much! It makes me so happy that you liked the chapter and that you feel thrilled about the future of this story! So much is pending from DOY but I needed to bring something daring and sweet :D It touches my heart that you feel this is your favourite story... Really :') <3 Hope you like this chapter I'm about to post!!! It's so good to be back, even after this crazy months we had :/ Thank you so much for being here with me all this time! <3 xx
@KAOT
This story is an excuse to his rambling xD I'm so glad you enjoy them, my friend. Tell me when you have enough ;) I'll try to keep that promise! Not so easy! xD Thank you for always being there. It really means a lot <3 xx
@lovetodance95
My dear! I'm glad you didn't freak out, because the surprise was huge! I work a lot to try to keep it unpredictable. You might have an idea of what will happen, but the way it'll happen is were I work the most! So happy you appreciate it! Get ready for the next ;) Thank you for being so lovely and supportive! xx
@#79442
Oh, girl, one day you'll kill me with these stupendous comments! You are the Queen! Let's see what you think of the next chapter! xx
Brilliant to move the story to LA. I am giggling that he's working with Drew and Nancy...I wonder if Jimmy will make a camio! I've got massive feels just anticipating what's to come in this next part of your story. I wonder if Harry is dating someone when he meets Jeanne again--he hasn't made it clear that he is completely single...I wonder if he's been in love in the last 4 years--maybe not the same way he felt for Jeanne, but something more typical. The math doesn't add up, but Harry seems to have a special connection to Lara. On the edge of my seat to read what's next. Bravo!!
I'm sure you don't want to hear it but I wasn't too surprised. You're too much into details to mention them having sex without a condom for nothing :p I've kept the idea of a pregnancy in mind ever since Harry refused to use one. But I did the maths and that girl is 1.5 years old while Harry hasn't seen Jeanne in almost 4 years. Those green eyes though.. Please tell me it's Manu's child :D
But I love Harry right now. He's much more collected and even surprises Jeanne by speaking French. He's grown up. At least it seems like it for the moment :D You know how fast I switch back to team Jeanne.
That pregnancy isn't even the thing I love about the chapter. I love the visible change in Harry. He knows much better how to behave in order to appear calm while inside he's a mess. Well done, most characters either stay the same or change completely. You managed to make Harry develop and grow up without being himself and that's a huge challenge you managed there :)
Sending lots of love my dear <3 xx And happy belated 300 votes!
And now Jeanne is a mother. Well played. It can't be some cliché thing, Harry being the father—you're too out of the box for that. Unless that's what you want me to think? You mess me up, woman!
And an author! What a great twist in this dilemma. The band being broken up, I could see. I can't figure out how old Harry is–is that just me? And does Lara speak just French or would she also know English?
And I'm speechless once again!! Im sooo glad that my favorite story is back! I've missed you! Anyway.... I'm sad that you have the band break up, but now I understand why!! This is going to be so great! And I'm so excited to see how Harry has grown!!! And Jeanne and her daughter are so sweet! And I'm excited to see how Harry is going to interact with them!! AHHH anyway I'm so excited for this story!! Thanks! Xoxo
"And park, like a person without mental issues" literally laughed out loud at that part. I rather enjoy his ramblings and thoughts. His inner voice is just everywhere. I did pick up on those flutterings in the epilouge but didn't know for sure. :)
Im just so happy to see you're back and publishing. This site needs more stories like this, more true to love and feelings and not about an abusive Harry that people apparently fall in love with. I can't wait for all the feels...just from reading the first chapter I'm so excited for the rest!
I knew I could never be fully prepared, and that's what I love about your stories. You can never predict what's coming next.
OMFG she has a daughter...
Well, I survived this, but I can tell you have a pile of surprises prepared for us, so bring on more drama!!! ;P
You've spoiled me, so now, deal with it ;)
Short: wunderbar, emocional, outrageous, izvrstno!
Excited for more much!!!
It's me softballchick79 - phone is all screwed up -
anyway .......
OMFG!!!!!!
YES YES YES as I swing my head side to side as in an orgasmic stance
YES!!!!!!!!!
@Harry_penguin
It's such a blessing to find readers like you, dear! Thank you for those lovely words. They mean a lot to me because I like challenges but most people prefer to read the same story once and again. But what can I say? You read DOY so I hope you understand my new choices! I have to keep the mystery to you somehow! Hope to hear from you after my update! The first chapter will be up later this afternoon! xx
@Ciao Niccie
Gracias, mi reina :D Such a pleasure to have you here, Goddess divine! Hope you find the sequel interesting ;) xx
@boltofblu
Hello, my sweet! Such lovely words towards my story :) Thank you so much! I do work a lot to bring things unknown to fan fiction's world as a deliberate imagery, and a theoretical frame. So it really means the world when people connect with it and enjoy it. I could read your comment again and again :D Lovesick Harry is so amazing to write I can't give up on him. So I hope you can manage the surprise and stick with my story. I couldn't bear to lose such a wonderful reader, but you read DOY so you know I'm all about challenges. Let me know your mind, OK? Hope to see you soon! xx
This is sooo good, fun, confusing and mysterious at the same time. Love the update! I especially love the fact that Harry is still stuck with tight jeans, such an important imformation ;P
I was lmao at 'u told me once you were a disco animal', refering to the night they met/seen each other for the 2nd time.
Great job. If you posted the whole story just now, I wouldn't complain, but 1st, you don't have it writen yet, and 2nd, it wouldn't be interesting.
Can't wait for more!!!
4/15/15