Dreaming Of You // If I'm Still Dreaming - Comments, page 16

@Alice Wonder
Hello, lovely! Thank you for these wonderful comments... Wow, you make me feel so fine. I love it when people read so well into the story. Jeanne is a woman with a history as we all are in a way or another. Harry has a lot to learn to be able to understand their story completely. He's working on it. He has grown up, but life plays tricks to us, and sometimes things become a little too much to handle. To him with Jeanne has always been like this. He knows her and he gets her, but he's into deep so he loses sight sometimes. Let's see what will happen next! I'm quite excited about it!

Thank you so much for reading and I hope this story could continue bringing nice things to you, enough for you to keep commenting like this! It really means a lot to me! Hope to hear from you soon! <3 xx

@Morgan__Who
Oh, dear, don't worry about that. I'm glad to know you enjoyed the chapter. I'll try to update later on today. So much is coming. I know you'll enjoy it and maybe even freak out a bit ;) We'll have Jeanne's POV in no time. Writing her is not simple though! She makes me work very hard. Well, hope you checked out those vids because it'll make it funnier. Thank you so much for reading, baby, and always commenting. I hope things are going well with you, and your family is fine! Love you, baby <3 xx

@lovetodance95
Oh, that conversation, my friend... :) I know everyone's getting nervous with all the coming and going, with all the subtle allusions, but that's the idea, to build up a lot of tension between those two. I think we've been waiting for an honest conversation for a whole year now ;)

You know I try to make justice to Harry. I try to write me as sweet and adorable as I can, and clumsy and silly as I imagine him to be. But he's clever too, though maybe next to Jeanne he doesn't see it because she's more experienced than him, more articulated, but there's more to her than her mind too. I love to write their cute, fluffy moments. I wish I could write those a lot more and just have a story about love and sex, but life's too complicated to write about just that xD Please, don't lose your patience with me! I'll update later so let's see what happens next! I'm sure you all will freak out ;)

Thank you for always been there, my friend. I know I've been busy these last weeks, but thank you for your constant support and sweetness. I appreciate it very much <3 xx

I really love your story... :)
Please keep updating!!!!

I finally made an account here just to suscribe to this story and to leave This comment here. Can't wait for the net chapter. This one was wild, and i was feeling almost as anxious as Harry the whole time, and to top it all you just gave a reason for why they never play fool's gold live and you just killed me. I have ranted so much about it , 'cause i can't understand why they don't perfom one of the best songs from Four, now I'm gonna get even more emotional every time i
listen to it, you definately know how to hit me right in the feels

I finally made an account here just to suscribe to this story and to leave This comment here. Can't wait for the net chapter. This one was wild, and i was feeling almost as anxious as Harry the whole time, and to top it all you just gave a reason for why they never play fool's gold live and you just killed me. I have ranted so much about it , 'cause i can't understand why they don't perfom one of the best songs from Four, now I'm gonna get even more emotional every time i
listen to it, you definately know how to hit me right in the feels

I really need this interview to be over, you are driving me insane just like Harry! Awesome writing, really, you are amazing!

Okay, totally commented yesterday. But apparently not?! I love this chapter, how Harry is so engrossed in his emotions and thoughts the rest of the world slips away. It's obvious he still loves her and he does really well hiding it on tv. But I love the hashtag game, of course a little lip syncing would have been fun too! I'm so proud of you friend for all that you have accomplished! It can only go up from here!!

@not_any_maryjane
I wanted to comment earlier, but I start reading your story a couple of days ago on wattpad, and I was so hooked up with all, that I just couldn't stop reading. :) Sorry. :D I love Jeanne, I fall in love with her just like Harry did. It was so easy. She's a woman with history, that makes her who she is, and I like it, I respect that. I think it is brave that she have a child with another man, man she doesn't love. And she wants more of them, that shows how much selfless she is. If the characters are perfect, then we would not have an opinion on them. They need to make an impression. I was just so overwhelmed in the previous chapter with Harry, because we read story through his eyes (mostly), and he was confused and then I become confused, and I just wanted that she make up her mind about two of them. I'm good now. :D And I love Harry in this second part of the book more. He's still obsessed and unsecured, but he's different. All things with Jeanne helped the caterpillar to transform into the butterfly. I think it was easier for her to cope with him when he was a "boy", now he's a man, and she have her doubts. I can't wait to see what happens next.
And am absolutely in love with this: "...as the queen of Hades that she is." It's so good. I need to remember that, it could be useful. :D
Congratulations for your new title! That's a really big thing. I hope to be there too, for a couple months. I wish you all the luck in your future work. (y) :D

P.S. I'll go watch those videos now! Love ya! ~Morgan

Hi lovely,
Sorry that I'm so late in writing my lovely comment! Life was crazy yesterday! Anyway what a lovely chapter! Harry's thoughts were really something in this chapter! I really missed his thinking and thought process. I forget how you depict his thoughts so remarkably! THis story really does bring me joy. But I must say that I really want a chapter with Jeanne's point of view soon! There were so many instances where I just wanted to hear what she was thinking! Anyway I LOVE there ship names. I must say Stars is the best one I have heard like EVER! Did you have that thought out from the very beginning? Well it was amazing! I loved it! Thank you so much for writing this story! It makes me feel so happy! XOXO Morgan

I'm anxiously waiting here for their proper, honest, open conversation.
Because this here is getting so teen that it hurts xD
Their electricity can be felt. And it would shake you, if you tried to touch the space between them, because of electrones that keep going from one to another. Like they're passing a ball on fire or a piece of dry ice, and nobody wants to get burns or frostbite. Or like they're playing that children game of picking daisy's petals. Loves me, loves me not :P
It was so sweet and funny when Harry said Jeanne would have to carry the weight of the bump and his all together. I believe his chances are more than slim. All they need is time.
Jeanne has had such short but smart answers in this chapter. I really fall in love with her character with every chapter. And I really love how you write Jimmy and whole interview. It's like I'm watching it live. Really great!
Thank you, I had a great time on Friday, dad was happy to go somewhere where he enjoys for his birthday :) Let's talk soon! xoxo

@Alice Wonder
Hello! I love your first comment! It rocked my world :) It was so, so nice to read. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it. I really need to know where readers are standing, so thank you. Your comment, especially being from a new perspective, is very enlightening in terms of the story. Jeanne was a huge risk I took. Not only because we only knew her from Harry's POV, but because she brings heavy topics that could make people dislike her, as being openly sexual. She has been very judged, and I've lost readers in chapters where some things about her story have been stated. I like that she remains a bit of a mystery even if we know the truth Harry ignores. I'm glad that you can complain about her, because she's not perfect and she makes her own mistakes. I don't like it when characters are perfect because the drama has to come from outside the story with some weird plot twist. I want real people who have to struggle to find the words or the right moment, because that's how life is. I like a character, as a person, that can be strong and vulnerable at the same time, and a character that can surprise us when we least expected it. That's how I write this story. During the first part we didn't know about Jeanne's struggle, and now, maybe there are things she doesn't know or control. So much is coming and I'm so excited about it. I hope my friends/readers find the same enthusiasm than me. You make it here after I had her having a baby with another man. I hope not to disappoint you now that we come this far :) So thank you so much for letting me know you and sharing your mind. This story pays tribute to many pieces of art. Certainly The Dreamers are a reference for me, and especially the Before Trilogy. Jeanne hasn't grown as neurotic as Céline, but they have an air, and a cute flat in Paris :) It wasn't for nothing I chose Shakespeare and Co for their first meeting :D A wink for those who love to wander around Paris in reality and in films ;) Hope to hear from you again. I miss my readers when they don't comment anymore, even if they continue reading. Thank you for your lovely, encouraging words. <3

@Your regular cookie
Hello there! Thank you so much for commenting, and for such a lovely comment. I'm not a catfish. I don't know what that came from. I know my female main character is sort of a catfish, but Jeanne has nothing to do with me. I just tried to bring a character and a plot that allowed me to speak about topic I care about. I'm glad some people enjoyed the challenge and read the story. I know it's different, and not something most of the people want to read, especially in a fandom like this one. But I don't complain. I have a amazing readers all over the globe. I wouldn't dare to complain :) I'm glad you enjoyed the Opera part. I hid quite a clue there but I guess it happened as I wanted and people were distracted or thinking Harry was very self-absorbed. She was crying because she knew what was coming for them, and yes, the aria in question is one of the last sentences of the first part, "the dream I would always want to dream." I want to write this story in a way I could make you doubt about my next step. Fanfiction is highly repetitive and I want something ground-breaking. I assumed the risks and stick to those who enjoy my vision. It will twist and turn a lot so don't get too comfortable ;) Thank you so much for sharing your mind. You are safe with me! Trust me! ;P

@Boltofbleu
I get so excited when I get your comments, my dear! Such an amazing comment. Thank you so, so much for taking so much caring with this story :) And the time, of course. Because you re read a lot of chapters last time :D I wasn't easy to write this story just on Harry's POV because a lot happened in Philly and I just had to keep notes and write down every detail and every hint. The sequence of Niall bumping with Jeanne at the bathroom to slightly suggest she could have met Anne there was quite complicated and that's why we have so much Niall in those chapters. It had to be there but not too much. I loved to write them though. It was a special moment, hard for Harry and even harder for Jeanne because, contrary to him, she thought it was goodbye forever. But there are even more things about Philly that will be revealed in this chapter I'm posted. I'm sure it will make sense to a good reader ;)

I'm glad you feel the setting add to this part of the story. I needed to have Harry listening to some things without being able to answer. Is this Jeanne's idea too or just the evil puppeteer that I am? Sometimes things just go out of hands. I LOVE Jimmy so writing him is a high in this story. He's the master. So it makes me happy that you all are enjoying him! Thank you so much for being one of my most amazing readers. I couldn't ask for more. You are incredible and it's an honour to write for you. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart!

@lovetodance95
Life's a struggle, my friend, you said so, and this story is certainly not a fairy tale, even if we got some fluff along the way. Harry has done a long way since the first chapter, and grow up in many ways, but love is a challenging force in life too. Because love, in every way––romantic, friendship, parents, siblings––, implies constant learning and caring to grow. These two have a lot of history together, and feelings, but their paths are not simple. Communication hasn't been fluid between them. Let's see if they're able to understand each other now! And who doesn't enjoy a bit of teenage love? What can go wrong now?! :D

Hope you enjoy what's coming, my dear! A lot of music and surprises! Thank you so much for your support, lovely. It really means the world. Hope you had a great time yesterday in Vienna, one of my favourite cities!!! <3 xx

@KAOT
There are in fact a few surprises for the next chapters, and a lot of music for sure! I'm so glad you are enjoying these chapters, because they weren't easy to write. This story is turning into a pain in the ass xD Why did I engage in this? I'm a mess. I just want to sleep for a whole month!!! Thank you for your support, my friend! I would be nowhere without you! :D

@Morgan__Who
Hello, baby! So pleased to have one of your comments every time. It really means a lot. Things are going crazy in this story, I know. I want to push things as much as I can to put Harry over the edge! I don't know why but I greatly enjoy it :D People don't want him to suffer but what's life without a little struggle? I have to keep this interesting. I'm bringing more music so I'll make a tracklist for the next chapter too. Hope you are fie and still enjoying this. Much love, dearest! <3 xx

Hi. :) So this is my first comment. :)
This story is the best I've read of all fanfictions yet. I must say that I like Jeanne from first part of the book more. Here, she's very confusing. She's mother and 29 years old, and she's like: "Do you eat peaches?” “Not anymore" and at the same time she's: “Too bad you didn't love him,”“Who said I didn’t?” (on the TV show, by the way, because she didn't had another opportunity?). Make up your mind, women! I'm trying to understand why she told them that, but Harry only gets mixed signals, and he think his all wrong, he only doubts himself, while she acts like some young, no experience girl - it's so unlike her. Like someone said in comment before "they're like teenagers".Maybe we need to see that she doesn't know what to do all the time and how fragile she really is, like she was in Philadelphia. I guess that without things like this, story wouldn't exist. Probably, we will find out later the meaning, in some of Jeanne P. O. V.
Anyway, your book is brilliant, your characters have a personality, every detail have it's place, and it's all very well fit in. I enjoy reading it. So you go girl. :)
P. S. Oh, and Jeanne, she reminds me on some mix of Eva Green, in a movie The Dreamers and Julie Delpy in trilogy Before. :D

@Your regular cookie
what a flattering 1st comment on this story. And our friend not_any_maryjane absolutely deserves it, because of her amazing work. Welcome! I also haven't been here since the very beginning, but it doesn't matter. You're another clever reader, and you answered all of your questions by yourself. This story is too revolutionary and too real for some to accept it. Keep reading, MJ always repeats herfelf that the feadback is what keeps writers going.:)