Dreaming Of You // If I'm Still Dreaming - Comments, page 42

Just realized how similar this story is to 500 Days Of Summer. Also my theory is that it's not that complicated, and that because Antoine cheated on Jeanne, she has built a wall around herself in a way, and sort of refuses to get into a serious relationship because she's too "scarred" to trust harry or anyone else to stay faithful to her, especially since harry would be gone for long periods of time at a time, she probably thinks harry would be tempted to cheat on her in some way and she would get her heart broken again

Hello! I've been reading you for so long, although I never commented before. It's amazing this thing you do to us! Ten chapters before then end you suggest everything you've been denying and that we wish for, which is Jeanne might love Harry back. So now I'm really confused, and I love it. This is how a story should be written :-) Can't wait to know more about her! I know you'll surprise us! Happy New Year!

P.S.: Oh, I forgot the theory! I think eiter way Jeanne is more than Harry can handle. Even if she loves him, she'd never be "his," and he'd never be okay with that. I hope I'm wrong as I want them to be happy, because I'm a hopeless romantic as the Tommo bear ;-)

Agh! I wish someone would do that for me! Though I'm not sure how much subconscious I put into my writing. God, babe, your vocab makes my brain hurt! ;)

Happy new year!! What an awesome chapter to start off the new year! I do love when you include all the boys in a chapter! I'm Always so curious about how they're seeing things!of course I do feel bad for poor Harry, but it's funny to see how he obbsesses over Jeanne! It's so cute when he gets all angry when the boys talk about her!
Thank you so much for writing this! Xoxo

Happy new year dear! Gods this year is off to a great start! I got my first new year's kiss and it was amazing. I adore Harry but come on, I can't let go of a guy who does not bat an eyelash when he caught me reading 1d fanfiction and merely asked what the story was about before spending an entire 3 days watching a harry potter and middle earth series movie marathon.
I'm so loved up right now that Harry's ramblings and confusion is extra emdearing to me right now. As for Jeanne, I remember a writer saying thar more often than not, they write stories that they did not consciously write. There are times where your body is on auto pilot and you let your mind relax and just go with the flow and words just start to appear and the characters rake a life of their own ans suddenly your story becomes a projection of everything your mind suppressed that you would not have expressed if you have reigns in what you write.I guess that is my rake on Jeanne but who knows maybe Jeanne would surprise me more.
Another year is here and I wish you all the best for it!

You are too sweet to mention my story, it means so much to be mentioned in such a fantastic story.

As as for this chapter, WOW, are the only words I can formulate at the moment. I love their approach to dissecting her work, things that people don't even think about, how complex her mind is. I'm nervous for Harry, he's very love blind. He doesn't think of the big picture. Or that her big picture might not include him, he doesn't understand that. I loved Zayn's quote of saying Harry's heart is going to die of overuse. Jeanne is and will probably always be independent, even if she does decided to "settle down."

As far as Harry and Jeanne are concerned, I do feels heartbreak in the future. And Harry might not be able tire over from it.

@not_any_maryjane
I left the comment out of pure excitement before I started reading :D
My theory of course is that Alicia hit the nail on the head. Cheating, no matter who did it, leaves marks... Jeanne might not see it or simply deny it but to me it's pretty clear.

Does it help if I leave 10 comments?
I think this might be my favourite chapter of the whole story. You really outdid yourself in portraying the boys. Louis, lecturing the others on how the word 'slut' is inappropriate. Niall.. I love his little comments - he's cute for being slow on the uptake.
And then again - the faith question. And I know now what you meant when you told me I knew Jeanne better than I thought. I tried to figure out when I lost my sense for being romantic and believing in faith for a long time - now I know it... I never dared blaming it on my past but your writing partly confirmed it. That's why I cannot wait for Jeanne to appear and prove them right or wrong.
Professor Alicia :) I like that idea.
Love you lots xx

@EleanorRigby
I don't see too much of a theory there xD

Oh holy moly shit you updated!!

Absolutely amazing!!
First off, I can't express how much I loved how you put Erica in from Just as much, such a great surprise to see her mentioned! I love that story too.
After this chapter, I am nervous for Harry as I don't know what else is going to be revealed to him and I know his heart won't be able to handle it. He's so defensive when the others tell him the truth, he is obsessed and I like how he admits it mentally but I truly believe in The truth hurts and this relates to Harry well.
I'm going to struggle waiting for your next post but your genius words are aways worth waiting for! Xx

So in a sense I was right - I had a feeling Triangle was based on a true story. I'm going to have to read it maybe once more. I feel Jeanne is torn between two loves, total opposite loves. While one pulls, the equal and opposite reaction is going in her heart and mind. Harry is her heart, the wild 'fly by the seat of your pants' love every girl wants. The immature type of love - the type of love he exhibits, but does he know genuine love?
You know me, I love deep, and this all rings too true in my own life.

@softballchick79
Your theory, Professor! Tell us your theory! ;)

I just cried :)

love it as always !!

@EleanorRigby
Oh, yes, I get you, sister! I can't manage him anymore xD He's so absurd. Of course it's the same force pushing the drooling guys to Jeanne which is working on him too, but he feels so special he thinks it's different with him... I have the cliché roles totally upside down, shhh ;) He's missing so much on the big picture for so many reasons. It's addicting to write him making a fool of himself xD He'll learn a great lesson by the end.

I'm starting to write Jeanne's thesis defence, and we'll have a lot of drama there because, yes, you can have drama related to knowledge. We college girls know about it, right? :/ It'll be the beginning of the great big bang you started wondering about! And then, the end! Now, I have to write the whole thing! Glad you are excited as much as I am!!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting, and to stick to the story through thick and thin! It means so much! Have a great 2015, my dear friend! Sending lots of love <3 xx

@TheTroubledNeophyte
My dear friend! I was totally wondering about you! But somehow I thought you should have travelled for Christmas? How was everything? My holidays have been very fine, thank you! Enjoying time with my family before returning to college. I haven't slept much though. I have this story to finish! Have you been time to write? I hope you had! I want to read more!

Well, I saw it so clearly. Harry is a five-year-old trapped in the body of a twenty-year-old ephebe xD As Pasternak would say, he's so childishly simple... The boys love him and know him so much. Otherwise he would have received at least a punch :P But this isn't over yet! We'll have plenty more of Harry making a fool of himself before the very end! Thank you so much for reading and commenting, my friend! I appreciate it very much! I hope you are OK in London. Have a happy New Year!!! xx

@Morgan_Who
My dear! You don't owe me any explanation! To have you here after six month is an honour to me! Thank you for sticking to this story! I know things have been surreal sometimes ;) Not much is left now. I hope you like what's coming! You'll have plenty of jealous Harry in a few chapters. Thank you for your support and always commenting, my friend! You mean a lot to me :) Happy New Year! <3 xx

@MysteriaHeart
Thank you! I wanted you to think they'll end up punching each other xD I'm evil! Well, I'm glad you are so engrossed in to the point of dreaming :) And of course I'll check on your story ;) Thank you for your lovely comments and for reading, dear! Have a very happy New Year! xx

@xRockMex
I'm so glad you liked it! It was pretty dramatic to write as I wanted to be fair with what I've been writing from the characters. But Harry is a bit out of himself and gets mad a lot. Let's see how he works it out next chapter, because he'll have to endure a bit of teasing ;) I wish I could write more of single one of them. Every boy plays a role on the story, and Zayn is definitely the peacemaker. We'll have a bit more before the end :) Thank you for reading and always commenting, my friend! Have a happy New Year! <3 x

@Kitten2014
Yes, exactly! I love this album and I love it connects to the story somehow. It's pretty amazing. I'm glad you feel it too :) Thank you for your lovely comment and for reading! It really means a lot! Happy New Year, my lovely friend! :) xx