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Picture Perfect - Comments, page 3

I feel like it's always easier to say that when someone else is the writer and you're the reader. Once a book is finished, I don't see how it can be improved more unless the author goes back and edits it which is a difficult task in and out of itself. I'll try to sound less needy when I'm writing my a/n or I'll just stop writing them altogether. There is no point in them if the interaction is one sided. Also, views work really interesting on this site. You could literally click a story once and never read it, but just because you clicked it, that counts as a view.

@LiveMyLife


littleafro littleafro
3/1/15

I get that you want commentaar and feedback... That normal... But I simply cannot give you a feedback if parts are missing... Most people ask feedback when they finish their story... If you look at your views you can see that your audience doesn't contain one person... And you can grow as a writer just by writing for yourself, don't forget that you can give yourself feedback... I said before, fan-fiction is non-profit. You can be very happy that there are so many views on your story. I never conment before because you were practicly begging for comments. That won't make many people comment...

a story is always worth it, if people read it or not.

LiveMyLife LiveMyLife
3/1/15

I write stories for an audience, and for awhile it seemed like my audience was limited to one person. If I was writing this story just for myself, I don't think I would have posted it because how are you supposed to grow as a writer with no one giving you feedback? I never knew you liked the story before since this is your first comment. Comments are a great opportunity for me to see what my readers are thinking or what feedback they could give me. They're more important to me than the vote, but I rarely get either of them. I appreciate your honestly I guess and thanks for reading.

I wouldn't call it insecurity, personally. Just frustration because I really enjoy writing things like poetry on my free time, but writing a story takes awhile and in order for me to keep going, I need to know it's worthwhile. I know how Picture Perfect ends, and I want to share that with people instead of keeping it to myself.

I really appreciate the fact that you actually took the time to comment.

littleafro littleafro
3/1/15

Stop being so insecure! Fan fiction is non-profit you're suppose to do this for you! If you enjoy writing story's then please continue, but don't continue if you are only doing this for votes and comments...

I mean this in the best way possible cause I really enjoy your story's, they are good!
So please keep writing for yourself!

LiveMyLife LiveMyLife
3/1/15

@xXKaleighStyles57Xx
Thanks Kaleigh. Your comments mean a lot. Hopefully other people feel the same way. Can we get this story up to 60 votes for another update? I promise it'll be worth it guys! Xx

littleafro littleafro
2/22/15

I finally got to read this and... OMIGOD! OMIGOD! I AM LITERALLY ABOUT TO HYPERVENTILATE! OH MY GOSH! This was just *Sniffs* So beautiful. Thanks for the Valentine's day gift Kay. Lol. I loved it :) xoxx

@KaleighStyles57
Thanks for making the attempt, and who knows? You'll just have to wait until I post the next chapter which will happen sometime this week (:

littleafro littleafro
2/1/15

Gem sounds a little like Gemma. And maybe he wants her to meet his family? Hell I don't know. That's an awful answer. Maybe they're going on a date?
Just forget I even tried to answer lol. I loved the update M xx

@KaleighStyles57
Thank you love xx. I hope you enjoy the update.

littleafro littleafro
1/25/15

@kkgal14
Good luck on your exams honey. And I can't wait for your update :) I'm sorry that your grades are low and I hope those go up. I love you and again, good luck! xx

@kkgal14 Awesome!!!

amanda jay amanda jay
1/21/15

@#75240
Thanks, love. I've never had anyone addicted to my writing before. I just finished writing the chapter I'm going to post on Friday so stay tuned xx.

littleafro littleafro
1/21/15
its so fucking addictive
amanda jay amanda jay
1/21/15

2 more votes you guys and you'll have an update <3~

littleafro littleafro
1/13/15

@KaleighStyles57
Thank you for your support Kaleigh. It really means a lot <3

littleafro littleafro
1/6/15

OMFG I love it girl! I can't wait for the next update :) xx

@Harry's_Dimples
Thank you so much. I'll update as soon as I can. I have the chapter written, but I'm having computer problems. Hopefully they'll be resolved soon.

littleafro littleafro
1/4/15

I. LOVE. IT. OMG U NEED TO UPDATE ASAP JUST KEEP DOIN WHAT UR DOIN ANS U'LL BE AN AMAZING WRITTER XXX

SmellyCat SmellyCat
1/4/15

Wow, every time I check back this story has more views. Thank you to everyone who took the time to click on my story. It means a lot to me. Hopefully, if it's to your liking, you'll also vote + subscribe. Xx

littleafro littleafro
12/26/14

The next chapter is in progress guys. I'm thinking of posting it on Christmas? It'll be my gift to you.