The Voice - Comments, page 6

@The Renegade
You know, I knew that about "insight" but I had a total brain fart. xD When I typed it, I stared at the word for at least fifteen seconds trying to figure out why it looked so weird.

Because I spelled it wrong.

Well, I see your point. It's not that much of a hint. x3 But I'm trying to not give it away too much, so I guess that's not necessarily a bad thing. Haha.

Okay, the sequel name isn't a big hint at all :P.

They way I see it, either Ev wins (which we're all rooting for, of course) and goes on tour, or somehow Eviall becomes public knowledge and she's disqualified, so Niall invites her on tour anyway (so they can put up with Brinley). Most likely the first one.
Yeah, you're a little bad at keeping secrets, but I guess I should blame myself for asking you too many question in the comments :P

Also, "incite" is actually insight, just fyi :)

Also, if Niall slips up even once, and his no-longer-normal nature is revealed to the public... Bam. Prepot find Audrey :/

Edit: Plus, they didn't use protection. Can I say mutant-babies? :P

Nailed it ;)
But I'm glad I did. Mutant-Niall is best Niall :P.

I'm really loving your update speed, and the quality of them. Half-way through already! I look forward to the second half :D :D. And the sequel, of course, when you eventually finish that.
I presume that this book is almost entirely about the show (hence the title The Voice), and then the sequel is about teenage-mutant-ninja-Evie (and not-quite-teenage-mutant-ninja-Niall) bringing down Prepot?

(not-quite teenage, but also not-quite mutant or ninja completely yet. At least, I wouldn't have thought the transformation would be complete over a single night)

OH SHIT!!! I KNEW IT!! I WAS THINKING ABOUT THAT THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE SEX SCENE!!

Anotherr update would be greatttt(:

Currently bored, but not tired enough to go to sleep. I guess it's time to re-read some "The Voice" chapters :)

Oh boop, they went there! :P

I like how she bit him right before they, er, finished. Niall's point of view would have been intense right there, what with the venom and all.

I wonder if this will initiate some kind of change in Niall. There were definitely bodily fluids exchanged in both directions ^_^. I also wonder what Ev's dad & Max are going to say when they (eventually) find out about this...

"Fillers" are usually necessary. If absolutely every chapter is drama-filled excitement, it usually gets over the top and too much. So in my opinion, "filler" chapters are necessary for a good story :).
Besides, there was a naked Louis in this one, so it was exciting enough ;P

Using lines to break up the graphic sections is probably a good idea. If you want to write it and get down and dirty with the details, there are plenty of us who will read that sort of thing ;) - but separating is good in case some people don't.

I'm sure her dad (and Max) will come around to the idea of her and Niall soon enough. But in the mean time, he can chew on the fact that Ev's her own person and will tell who she wants what she wants ^_^.

As always, excellent chapter :D

Damn! Im speechless! I love the update!

@sophstylesdedophoran
I'll update tonight! I promise! :)

IM GONNA LITERALY DIE IF THIS IS NOT UPDATED

Aweshum :DDDD
chu should have Everit sing Seohyun's version of Jack by Pixie Lott :DD
can't wait to read the next chappie ^_^

Update update plz !!!!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

@The Renegade
Or maybe its the relationship with adam just like christina had with adam

@The Renegade
Yeah. I think its because of her personality or idk she just remind me of christina

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

Yeah, I know she didn't win. I was just saying, the fact that she was on the voice is one reason why Ev reminds you of Christina :P

@The Renegade
no christina lost. she was in third place:(

@LIZZY THAT GIRL
I watched this season of the Voice for the finale and was beyond shocked at Christina! She made me think of Everit! It was kinda interesting to me how that happened. Lol.