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The Voice - Comments, page 4

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@CaptainHawkeye

Aha, that explains that then :P. I'll keep an eye out for any Liam slip-ups in future chapters ;)

Edit: (after reading the chapter) With that dress, I'd totally go the whole mile and wear her pink fuzzy slippers :D

The Renegade The Renegade
6/22/14

@BritineylovesHarry
Thank you so much. :D I'm glad you enjoy it. :)

CaptainHawkeye CaptainHawkeye
6/22/14

@CaptainHawkeye
Love this story and may I say you are a fantastic writer.

BritineylovesHarry BritineylovesHarry
6/22/14

@The Renegade
Oh my goodness, you're right. o.o I originally had his name as Liam, and I changed it to Noah because it was far too confusing. >.< And I thought I had caught all those times, but apparently I was wrong. Sorry! You are right! It was supposed to be Noah. :P

CaptainHawkeye CaptainHawkeye
6/22/14

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
bc

  1. she put brinley in her place
  2. they're together forever
  3. she's trusting them to keep the secret!!!!!!!!!!
is ella coming back?
sophstylesdedophoran sophstylesdedophoran
6/21/14

Great updateeeee

glowstick. glowstick.
6/21/14

Good to hear from you :)

So as far as I'm aware, when they go outside, Noah, Kiley and Maddie are there (and Niall joins them eventually). So where you've written:
“If you don’t win this, how are you two ever gonna have a relationship?” Liam scoffed.
I think it's supposed to be Noah talking, based off the rest of the rest of his dialogue too.

Anywho, good chapter. Silly Evie, Demi's got nothing on you :P

The Renegade The Renegade
6/21/14

PLEASE UPDATE!!!! Can't take it anymore!!! PLEASE!!!!!! I think I might die of waiting!! Oh and I love your fast in music!!! :) :3 :D

Musiclover 101 Musiclover 101
6/21/14

Noooooooo!!!!! I just finished chpt. 36 (and I love the story) but there isn't any more!!! I'm going to DIE without more! To. Amazing. To. Live. Without!

WhatIWant WhatIWant
6/17/14

I love this fanfic and it is now my #1 I can't wait till the tour Xd

BritineylovesHarry BritineylovesHarry
6/17/14

Cannot wait for a new chapter. This is by far one of the best stories I've read.

beebaebee beebaebee
6/16/14

I love demi lovato in real life but I freaking hate her in this story!!! I felt attched to evie even though she's not real! I guess it because she reminds me of christina grimme and I love her!

queen.lizzy queen.lizzy
6/15/14

I love this story so much

aimeevampirefiction aimeevampirefiction
6/14/14

Oh, quick question. Are you going to put Demi/Chris in the characters list? Just wondering :)

The Renegade The Renegade
6/12/14

We've been awesome? Really? All we do is sit down here and tell you that you're doing a f*cking amazing job :D. You're the one who deserves all of the credit here.

In other words, get cracking on The Tour :P.
But seriously, don't rush. I'm sure it'll be just as good a story as this one, and I'm keen to see this through to the end before poking at the sequel.

Thanks again for you being awesome :D :D

The Renegade The Renegade @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
6/11/14

@CaptainHawkeye
Thank u so much for updating twicein one day!!!!!
I feel like a kid in a candy shop♥♥♥

breadboy101 breadboy101 @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
6/11/14

@CaptainHawkeye
Awesome chapter!!!!! I was jumping up and down the whole chapter!!!
u r an Amazayn writer♥♥♥
update again soon♡♡♡♡

breadboy101 breadboy101 @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
6/11/14

This is the best story ever but I was even more excited than Everett seriously I was screaming like a little girl hahah please update soon I love this story

aimeevampirefiction aimeevampirefiction
6/10/14

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

hahahahah IKR???

NikelSmiley NikelSmiley
6/10/14

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

hahahahah IKR???

NikelSmiley NikelSmiley
6/10/14