Secrets / Black & White / Playing for Keeps - Comments, page 22

@Everso
I hope that next chapter comes soon! :)

@ohhboybands

Haha :) We'll see in the next chapter if they are *that* wasted... :)

What the freak does Harry know that's got his panties in a twist!?!?! Like holy cow what was he thinking when he dared Lara to kiss Louis! And are they seriously that wasted, that they'll do it!

@Angelica

Thanks Angelica :) Yeah, there's a lot of secrets going on here & things will kind of heat up in the next chapter :)

Aww man, Good chapter.. I was thinking the same thing that it might be Ben.. Honestly the truth needs to be set free. All these lies, from every direction.

@ohhboybands

Aw I definitely don't get sick of your comments... I appreciate the fact that you take the time to make them so- comment away! :) It's so cool to hear your thoughts on where the story is going and what you might think will happen. I hope I don't let you down!!! :) As for what will happen? More Louis and Lara interaction to come (that's all I will say!):)

I'm reading this (note) like always and so a comment it is... Hope you don't get too sick of mine, since I feel like I'm always leaving comments... Anyway the real big question is how are they going to test the relationship, would Louis sabotage it for his own personal gain of hopefully winning back Harry. I sure hope not, but man would that be quiet the twist. Lastly I don't know if I believe that black SUV was Louis, kind of wondering if Ben is keeping tabs on Lara now days and thats who was in the SUV... Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Ohhh and I just thought of it this, but it could be Harry trying to figure out why she hasn't called him back all day!

@ohsugar.
Thank you!!! :)

@ohhboybands

Aw yeah, I liked the little bit of colour thing too :) Kind of sad but still cute at the same time. :)

Man when Ben told her about the paper, I totally expected it to be the article about her and have him question her about LA. Also I loved the whole Harry is all the color she needs part! It was so well written and so cute!

So good!

@Angelica

Aw thank you so much!!! Considering that I don't usually share the stuff I write, that means a lot!! :)

@Astyles

Haha Astyles, like what kind of new excitement? :)

Im so done with ben! I want new excitement!

Everything is about to come crashing down for Lara! I feel it. lol. You know.... Now that I'm thinking about it.... You are a really really great writer.

@ohhboybands

It may or may not be the moment of truth :)

The paps are everywhere, which means Ben is so going to find out, even if she does cover her face!?!?! :0

@Angelica

No way! So you've been here from the beginning- yay you! :)

Haha, yes. Id like to say I've gotten to know that bit. I've literally been here when there was only like 3 chapters if I recall!

@Angelica

Hahaha "knowing me" :) Thanks Angelica... we'll see in the next chapter!