Secrets / Black & White / Playing for Keeps - Comments, page 21

Oh snap, there better not be no threesome. Lol. What the next few chapters need are emotional clarity.. Tired of them fucking so much and not facing their damn emotions. Lara's a wreck!

@Astyles

Awww!! :)

@ohhboybands

Glad you caught up to the latest chapter! Next chapter will get 'interesting' :)

@Snazzy

It's sad isn't it... hopefully things improve, but no promises ;) Thanks for your compliments, they mean a lot!! :)

I just smell trouble. It almost feels like everyone is using Lara - Ben Louis harry all seem to have their own agenda and no one is really focused on her and her happiness???
loving your writing and the updates thanks!

Some how I think I missed last weeks update! Anyway I absolutely enjoyed this chapter, Louis now fully knows about Lara and Ben. I wonder what could happen next and what on earth is Ben giving her because it can't be good!

I just want her to be happy!!!

@Angelica

Aw it's kinda sad isn't it? Especially when you consider what she was like when the story first started!

I wish I could go into the story and just cradle Lara... She really has no one on her side.. That's why she turns to the drugs... She's so down for Harry, it hurts! She deserves the same of which she gives out.. Great chapter btw.

@Snazzy

Thanks for your lovely comments :) So happy to hear you like the story.
Poor Lara :( You're right, Harry needs to get his act together. We'll just have to wait and see what happens :)

Loved latest chapter I love every chapter you write. I don't love that harry still isn't realising that he needs to be real and actually date her properly. But maybe he will when he sees Ben get his claws back in. I feel bad for how alone and desperate she feels

@ohhboybands

Oh my God :) I'm so glad you liked it... I was a bit nervous about the direction the story was taking! :)

BEN!!!!!!!! AHHHHH this isn't going to end well and I can't wait to read it! Also holy f**ks that thing between Louis, Harry, and Lara was just kjdnffajkfnn!?!?!

@KAOT

Just saw your comment and have uploaded a new chapter- Enjoy! :)

Patiently waiting for an update! Love this story, and waiting for Harry to realize how he's acting...

@Snazzy
Thanks Snazzy! Yep, a reality check is definitely needed! :)

I'm loving how this story is progressing. Harry needs a reality check he can't treat her this way. Hopefully this will make him be exclusive

@Angelica
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Hope you enjoy your day!! :) :) xx

@ohhboybands
It will I promise! :)

Ooo that chapter made me so tense. Lol, I hope she doesn't. It'll only make things worse. He's jealous enough. Lol, but btw today's my birthday