Reviews with the Reader - Comments, page 13

My stories Paper Stars and Demented? Thanks x

@This_crazy_girl
Okay! I will ask someone! And I'll message you!

Omg thank you so much!!! I really appreciate it

@Mayci Horan
Your review is up! Tell me what you think, thanks for waiting. :)

@Missesonedirection94
Sure, if you would do a constructive criticism review or some thing along those lines that would be great! Also a word of advice, when reading the story keep notes through the story. That way you will rember the things you read and saw that might need help in the future.

Thanks! Xx

@This_crazy_girl
I actually have a review thing! If you want me review another story I can! I just thought I'll let you know, I have one of these reviewy things. Thanks xoxo

@Missesonedirection94
Sure, I haven't picked yet. Although I would like to see how you would review a story so you can review any one that will let you, which I'm sure that many people will be happy for you to do. Then send me the review or something. (More on this topic under the important note chapter)

Thanks! Xx

@This_crazy_girl
I'll co author with you! If the spots still avalible?

@Bmo_Tomlinson
Yeah, I haven't done any thing with a co-author before. So I really can't say I know how it feels. Haha :)

@This_crazy_girl
Ok :)

And I can co author after you do my story, I just want some more feed back. It's still new. :) And I'm co authoring on the book, so the writing on chapters is different. :)

@Bmo_Tomlinson
Sure i'll add it to the list. :)

'Bullies to Kiddnappers' please! :)

Thanks!! :)

@Rubyklewis
Your reviews up! Sorry it so short, tell me what you think. :)

@Heartache-On-The-Big-Screen

Sure I'll add it to the list!

@punkrockshow
Sounds great! I'll add your story to the list!

I've only got the first chapter up, but some criticism/reviewing on Carnivale would be appreciated :) xx

Also; I'd be more than interesting in helping with reviews - I just need to find someone to review a work on but I'm working on it x

Hey I was wondering could you please review my story, perfect act

@goldenheart
Sure thing! I'll add it to the list. :)

got the second part of captured up called Stand I would love it if you could review it when you get the chance.
much love
G.H