Reviews with the Reader - Comments, page 5

@This_crazy_girl
Yup!

hey i got a story called late, I'm wondering what i can do better, thx :)

Can you review mine? It's called Eyes Open? Please?

@ourboysRthebest
Haha, it's only natural. :D

Haha! "Most people have grammar mistakes, and if they don't, they are probably inhuman and can't be trusted." I agree :)

Love lust, and eighteen
can you plz review those(:*

Embers
Diana... I'll come back for you
Couples Project.

Could you review ^ those! Thx

@Zaynslivingdoll
Sure thing! I like reading stories, and all the different ones you see that people write.

@TheKat
Haha wow, that's amazing! I'm from the USA so I probably wouldn't know, but wow that's so cool! I love technology. :3 ❤

Danke! (My brother went to Germany once for a choir trip so I know like thanks, welcome, and restroom. Haha)

Thanks, for the review. I will take your constructive criticism into consideration and apply it into the following chapters.

@This_crazy_girl
Thank you so so much for the review, seriously, I have a hard time attracting reader on here, so hearing that you enjoyed the story means a lot.
Sturmflut is german for storm surge - Emily is german, and so am I. So there will be mistakes, no matter how often I read over it, but I promise that once my semester is over I'll have a friend check everything.
I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story too, you are in for a long journey.
xx

When your list gets low and you have time, would you mind reviewing and being brutally honest with my story, I'm From One Direction Damn it!
I would leave a link but I'm on my phone right now, so I'm sorry -_-
thank you for your time if you can!

@This_crazy_girl
Nice, thank you :D

@Perfect Little Porcelain
Your review is posted, tell me what you think! Sorry for the wait!

@wonderful .
Sure thing! I'll change it in my note when I get the chance.

I was wondering if you could instead do Paper Stars and my new story Alter, since it's so much shorter than Demented. Thank you so much x

Could you review the stories Lips & Regrets - and the story Summertime Sadness :) xox

Could you review my story "All for the Press?" Thanks! :D

Can you review my story "can't love you"?

Could you please review my story What About Angels. I am sort of underestimate of what I am doing that is making people not like it.and I want to know what i can do better. Thank you in advance