Abhor - Comments

I can't believe I didn't find this story until recently, but it is so amazing. I really hope you pick it back up some time (:

I doubt you'll be around to read this - but I miss your writing.

Yassss!! Thank you!! I'll stay here till the end!!!

@cloudyskye
Thank you ! <3 I will keep going (:

@Tommo_Be_Like
Thank you ! As I said previously I will keep going ! (: Thank you both for reading !

I really like this story, it's different from others. It's a very original idea and i'd love to know what happens, please continue with the story and don't delete it, i lovee it!!
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I just started and read this whole story and I am absolutely in love!! Please keep going it is one of the most well-written stories I've read in a while!

@babyblues
Thank you ! It literally has been so long since I have had new readers, and I'm glad you like it (:

I just started reading this, I'm only onto chapter 4 but you write absolutely beautifully.

I was going to update now, but I don't know if anybody would be reading at this time ya know ?

Ohhh okay thanks for telling me and I really confused up till now with all of that. Thanks again to replying.. means alot c: and can't wait till the update its one incredible story

ah yes I remember ! Well thank you for continuing to read this (: And well considering they were at like those illegal underground matches, majority of the students that are at the place are university students from both campuses (As in both opponents are school students fighting ) Theo was the opponents sort of friend/fan but also knew Harry. Just a general overview of him, he's a total momma's boy. Raised in a 'treat your women like princesses' environment, but tried to fit in by befriending the guy who hit Mia. I have yet to say his name but he will be a massive part of the story itself. Theo on the other hand is like a protective brother, and when he witnessed him hitting her made him realize what kind of man that guy was

@XxlovedoneXx

Chapter 9 was amazing. And at the end of it I was kinda confused I don't know if I read over something but who's Theo again? And that's basically the only think I have to say except that you are doing a great job on this story and I can't wait till chapter 10 :DD

I have been here since the start. We used to message eachother I was reading through my messages and saw ours and saw this story ans remembered this was the story we were talking about and decided to comment on it. And make sure everyone knows I'm watching them... xD

^.^ Thank you ! I appreciate your comment ! I will be updating sometime soon (very soon, i have a chapter ready) but due to my lag of updates, I want to at least have another chapter ready in case I slow down on writing ! I used to have a lot of subscribers, and viewers on my other stories, but considering they aren't that great (And that this is my first story I put a lot of effort into) I could sort of understand. But thank you again ! i'm glad you like my story (:

@XxlovedoneXx

Question? How the fuck do you only have 34 subscribers.. this story is absolutely amazing.. and I see you over 1000 people looking at this story and leaving this page e.e yeah I see you... so I suggest you tap on that subscribe button and give it 10 stars...

Christian Grey is not a rapist or an abuser. If you read the book, which I have, he doesn't start anything without her consent. Throughout the story she allows him to show her his sexual lifestyle, and although she accepts a lot more than she could've handled at the time she still accepted it. He never had sex with her whilst she was drunk or intoxicated, and he was nothing but a gentleman to her. I know what BDSM is. And it is far from 'safe and sane.' It is consensual, but the acts of it are usually abusive. Not saying that the person isn't enjoying the sexual abuse, but the items they use are for their unique sexual pleasures can be harmful.

I can tell that you aren't very open to things like so, which makes sense as to why you call them rapist or abusers. I don't want to point fingers, and say you're a virgin, but as I was one a until I was 18 I understand your POV. Even if you weren't, some people aren't very open in sex, and only have 'vanilla'.

All my stories are very dominant, and tough love (Excessive drama). It's normally what I prefer. I like the mysterious types that don't let off much. Which makes a book more interesting when reading it. I can't seem to write delicate romance, it doesn't interest me. BUT it may interest others. It's just different for everyone.

In regards to After, there are a lot of men/boys/guys/whatever that are like that. I've met plenty , and know plenty who would do the exact same thing. Of course I doubt they would fall in love with the girl they sort of bullied. But Harry and Tessa had chemistry even though he refused to admit it.

@charlie2cute

@dontjockmystyles
Maybe they do have chemistry, but he doesn't change for her. He's still an abusive jackass, he just becomes a one-girl only abusive jackass. Because the author decided that's how it should be. And he becomes a better manipulator.

If by "sexual abuse" you mean BDSM, I suggest doing some research on it. And no 50 shades of Grey does not count (that's not BDSM, Christian Grey is a rapist and abuser). The BDSM motto is "Safe, sane and consensual," which means she has to be in the right state of mind to agree (aka not drunk and not being manipulated), they have to do it safely and she actually does have to agree.

@charlie2cute
Well i think what you mean is to not make him abusive and rapist-y ! haha I think the only abuse he would do to Mia is well sexual sort of abuse ? Not in an rape sort of way haha !

Well i think the reason why I liked it was because that's all everyone ever talked about. After this after that. So i decided to read it myself which was only about 4 months ago, so I wasn't an avid sort of fan who kept up to date all the time. I did like their chemistry, and although I do agree on many of the points you have made there also was a part to the story that did attract me. I liked the drama in their romance, I like his undeniable love for her, and how he changed because of her. BUT i do agree that the plot goes on for way to long. also I do not agree with the whole making this into a movie, and publishing it into a film/book because i think it gives the boys a bad rep. I actually am totally against it. I hate the fact that this girl is taking the light off of so many great authors on watt pad. I think the only reason why she's gotten this sort of fame is because the whole fandom talked about it. Not because the story was great itself. But the one thing I do really like about it is the hidden love story. Yes it may seem a bit abusive, and there are some things I do not agree with but i love the tough love sort of love story so i guess thats what lured me in.

@charlie2cute

@dontjockmystyles

Just because people slut-shame, doesn't mean it's right and just because girls say they'd like to be thrown against a wall by hot guy, doesn't mean that they would actually like it or that it's right. Plenty of girls also said they'd like to be beaten up Chris Brown, and my reaction to that was to want to shake them and slap some sense into them.


Again - just be careful with jerk-Harry. Make sure he's abusive and rape-y.

And no After is really NOT a great story. Tessa is a terrible, terrible person (she's a judgemental, misogynist and a hypocrite and also a moron); Harry is not Harry, but rather an abusive rapist creep; the writing style is something that I would've written when I was 13 or 14, not something that a 25 year old should write; the characters are cardboard cutouts and the way they talk and act sounds more like they are in middle school rather than in college (and no, having sex, kissing, drinking and getting tattoos does not make them sound older), it's full of slut-shaming and misogyny and so on and so forth - I can go on forever, so I'll stop here. But if you do like it, I can't stop you, that's your choice. I just hope you understand that's not the kind of relationship you want to be in. Also, may I just ask WHY you like it? What is about that's so good or appealing in your opinion? I am really just trying to understand, because to me there's absolutely nothing fun or of value in that story. (Ok, no that's not true, I learnt the word 'comforter' (English is not my first language xD) and I got a pretty good song out of it.)

Thank you ! I appreciate the constructive criticism, and it will help whilst I continue to write. I have read After, and the story is great (wish it were a bit shorter as its drabs on) But I in no way am trying to write like it. I will definitely revise my punctuation ! Thank you ! I personally dorm at college, and there has been mishaps on rooms before. Greek life at my campus does have separate housing, and if there were an empty room at a house campus officials usually use it regardless if you didn't or weren't a part of greek life. Jerk Harry (Well is supposed to be a jerk) A rich adonis who wants what he wants when he wants it. So dominance makes it harder for him to seem nice and normal. Being dominant and rich makes him overbearing, and sort of stalkerish as he can find out what he wants (again when he wants it).

Now I understand slut shaming is horrible but I am no way going to mask the fact that 99.9% of our whole society does it. Guys will call a virgin a slut because of the way she acts. So, it's normal for university students to use it often. NOW secondly, all of the girls I know, and all of the girls I've met but have not become acquainted with use sexual terms. As in. If we see a hot guy we'll make a comment about being thrown against a wall and done dirty things to ! Also I haven't gotten to the part where she explains why she hates university but my main protagonist wanted to live life. She didn't want her parents to put her in the university they funded, she wanted to go to a university in NYC where she could pursue her dreams, and not take on the family company. But then again, I really appreciate the fact that you elaborated on the things that stood out to you. Thank you !

@charlie2cute