Quick Tips - Comments, page 8

@Beebee321
there's a button thing at the bottom for like the summary and stuff and its right where you click submit.

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
OMG how do u change that?!?!!! I always try to change mine and it won't?!?!?! How!!!!!!!!???

I have a tip. Take off the completed thing at the bottom if its not completed!! So many stories have that I like to read finished stories. So I think it's a whole story that's finished but when it goes to the summary it's like one or two chapters!!

Dose anyone know a good fanfic to read?

Can you review my story: 'New Girl' please? Thanks!! :)



~Naomi

@Mrs. Storplikson
hahah idk

@Beebee321
Thank you!

Hehe. She gave birth at his house the end. THAT WOULD BE THE STUPIDEST STORY EVER! LIKE, WTF?! WHY WOULD NIALL HAVE SEX WITH A FAN BEHIND WAL-MART AND GET HER PREGO?! Pffffff. :P

@Georgia Rose Horan
oh sure

Could you please review my story Stole My Heart? It's my first one. Thank You! :)

@Mrs. Storplikson
Your welcome

@Beebee321
Ok! :) Thanks for reviewing them! :)

@Beebee321
Ok! :) Thanks for reviewing them! :)

@Mrs. Storplikson
Ok so I finished reading your story's.

Mix up: I really like your idea but you came on too strong to have the first scene her winning tickets. And also it's a little cleshé. Try to stay away from that. And make the chapters a tiny bit longer.

The channel that changed my life: that story was not a cleshé, so that was good. All you need to work on that one is to word it better, so to speak. Like, add more details, use better sentence fluency, stuff like that

i really liked your ideas for each story. I would keep updating and defiantly work on better sentence fluency, but really nice job! :)

@Beebee321
Thanks!! :)

@Mrs. Storplikson
Ok

Can you review my stories: 'The Channel That Changed my Life' and 'Mix Up' please?

Thanks! :)

~Naomi

@FutureMrsPayne
your welcome, sorry it took so long.

Thank you for putting my suggestion! XD

@FutureMrsPayne
Great, thanks!