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@KrystalKrissyWrightStyles204
Yeah I think that would be good. I have read some stories where it's just, terrible. You need to feel all the emotions that you are supposed to be feeling. Some people don't quite know how to grasp that

@MidnightMemory

i know and im gonna add a chapter about how add Emotion to your story maybe do u want me to

@KrystalKrissyWrightStyles204
I really liked all the points about summaries, because, to me, the summary really makes or breaks if I want to read the story or not. If someone just puts "Read to find out" or something along those lines, I am less interested in reading the story.

@MidnightMemory

aww thanks what point did u like

@KrystalKrissyWrightStyles204
I did, it had a lot of good points :)

@MidnightMemory

lol wow did u like the last chapter

@Blue-Eyed Girl
The last chapter, the summary

@KrystalKrissyWrightStyles204
They followed me on twitter the other day and I fangirled so hard!! Haha

@MidnightMemory

me too

@MidnightMemory

in what chapter

This is kind of random, but I love that you used the names of the Big Time Rush boys! Haha they are my other favorite boy band :) Anyway, random, I know, but I just had to say that

@Cara cupcake styles
Sure, byw thank u

oh and btw i literally died of laughter at this tip

hey could you please maybe read and review my new fanfic? its called "sin" and i just recently started it. Can u tell me how to improve my writing and what you think, thank uuuuuuu xx

@A girl with a dream
Oh it might be a wile, my internet is slow... Maybe 2-3 days?... Or tomarrow

@A girl with a dream
Sure

@Mrs. Storplikson
Yea, I do

Could you pretty please read my story and let me know what you think? That would be amazing! (Oh and dont worry its not that long haha)
It's called All for the Press

@Beebee321
Oh, do you press submit after you change it?

@Beebee321
Lol

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Yea Ik, but it won't change! Im
just going to forget bout it.