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@PSLive the dream
hey girlfriend! You're missing the passcode! check chapter 69 and i'll do it in a heart beat!
Hello there lovely...I have read some of your tips and they are great....already need some changes in my story :)
I want to ask if you could possibly review my story? You seem very honest and legit with this and I really want to know what you think of my story...it is 16 chapters long...hopefully that's o.k...
You can say as many bad that as you want about my story:D That's what I want....I want to improve and for people to give a honesty answer is all I could ask for ^_^ If you could review my story, it will mean the world to me :)
Story title: Darkness's light
Thank you so much love xxx hopefully you will find the time :D

holy shit I'm so making a chapter on that!! I promise to give you credit and tell you when its up! thx for the inspiration
While I'm tired of tumblr girls, I'm also incredibly tired of Ariana Grande and Selena Gomez >.> as soon as I see that, I'm out.
I totally agree! I hate when authors use tumblr girls as their characters....like, I can tell that's a damn tumblr girl on your character list. It makes me not want to read the story.
My story Brontide is still fairly new to this site and I am always looking for reviews, in hope of getting new readers.
Just beware, my story isn't some light reading and it might not be to your liking, which is totally OK.
I would be forever grateful if you could find the time to read Brontide.
Oh and there are no peaches in my story, but plums are mentioned.
xx
Kat
@PSLive the dream
Thank you! I'll be sure to get to ya ASAP!!
4/14/15