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Hey, I was just wondering if you could review my story; Cross Country
It is 17 chapters but most are short depending on the situation. Uhm, there is smut but its not a full on porno story :P I just need an honest opinion on what to do and how to improve it. It would mean a lot if you could review it, thank you.

Lol I'm gonna make a story based on chapter 23

@Zaynlove
yes! it may be a wile though :( sorry for the inconvince

can you review my story Visiting Hours??

@ChloeSpark
don't be worried :)

@JustYourGal
yes I can!

@Nutalla_lover
Thanks a lot ^^ I was a tiny bit worried though ^^

Could you review my story, Say Something, please?

@ChloeSpark
Yes definitely and 19 chapters is just fine!

Hey i would love it of you could review my story although it's already 19 chapters long ^^ (but not that long chapters) ^^ it's called Ballet and Lust ^^ and honesty is what I'm after so don't mind being blunt ^^ thanks a lot

@kkgal14
Your very welcome :)

@Nutalla_lover
Thanks :)

@kkgal14
Of corse, right away!

@A girl with a dream
Yes, definetly

Can you review 'Picture Perfect'? I don't mind waiting. :)

Could you review my story 'Plunge'? I don't mind waiting :) take your time

yes, of cousre

Can you review my story Human Monster? Take your time.

:)

im sorry, i did not update in a wile and therefore i could not answer back to comments like i would usually do... but btw thank y'all for enjoying this!!!!!!! and i can review any story, just message me, it would get to me faster because if my @ name is not on there then i won't find it for a month! lol. so if u still want me to review it i would gladly do it
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