Troubles (Kissing The Devil) - Comments, page 2

i love this so much i hope the next chapters quickl

I KNEW IT

omg not her brother i just hope Niall and her end up together and he protects her from everything and there cute together i love this story so much

okay two things.
No.1 NO NO NO NO NO NO NO THEY DID NOT TSKE HER FUCKING BROTHER OOOH I WILL CUT A BITCH OOH THEA BETTER KNOXK A BITCHES TEETH OUT WITH A SLEDGEHAMMERI LIKE BITCH WE ALL KNOW IT WAS FUCKING JORDAN STUPID TWAT ASS CUNT FACED SLUT URGGHHH IM GOING TO SLAY A BISH.

No.2 That party/drunk scene was life, love, and everything in between

probably in two or tree days. I'll be as fast as possible

whens the next update

Bruh this book is like ighhhhh kill me its that good

@Heyy_its_louis
Awn, I'm glad you like it <3
I'll update soon, promise!

I can't breath fyi I read this over and over looking for small
things I missed and man it all
takes my breath away.

Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!omg please!!!!

@Ijustlovefood

please update i love ur story please keep going...

Omgerd he's coming over???? Lol good luck Thea...

But she just saved him like... ugh my hair is trembling

@MimiMalik
Ahah :))
I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far :)

@Ijustlovefood
I saw his moments of hesitation and ooh huh more bad ass than threatening children…I'm getting goosebumps ;)

@MimiMalik
He's actually beeing nicer now, just wait a few more chapters and you'll really see how he is!

Pmg thos book tho. Wow you weren't kidding when you said Niall would be a dick…

Good story so far :)
Just a quick comment - she says "I looked up to see Niall widening his eyes." about a third of the way in, but at this point she doesn't know his name is Niall yet, you might want to change that to Trouble.
Other than that, nice work, I look forward to future updates :D

Love it!
Update soon!

Update I love this book!!!!

Love it plz update soon X :)