Snake Eyes (Louis Tomlinson Fan Fic) - Comments, page 5

Love you for the double update. Harrys reaction was fantastic i couldn't stop laughing :P i think its sweet how Loren is changing Louis for the better. He'll prob realize that she is perfect for him n he is falling for her if she was ever apart from him. I can't wait until she gets her make over Louis is gonna be in awe. Update soon. :)

@exhaletruth

Glad you liked it. I don't know why I was so nervous about writing it - it's a lot tamer than a couple of chapters I wrote for "For Always, For Eternity" :0. I guess it's because it's my first solo story and it's all on me lol.

OmG absolutely loved the chapter. I definitely think Harry is the only one Who will be surprised maybe even freak out, can't wait to read his reaction :P

@exhaletruth

Thanks! You will find out tonight :)

@LTStyles92

i wouldn't want u to write it any other way. Can't wait to see what happens :)

@exhaletruth

I would have beat his ass if it were my kid, but that is the logical conclusion. So, I decided to go against the grain. I struggled a little with the chapter and actually wrote it with a lot of drama and this way. In the end, the other way seemed so typical and dragged out so long. Plus, I wanted to go with Louis questioning if he was good enough for Loren with some of the comments he received (since he's been such a pompous ass). Next chapter will be up tomorrow night and you'll see what happens ;).

@bonnie_st.cloud

You will have your update tomorrow night. Glad you are enjoying the story!

That little devil he better not be trying to get with her again although it is cute that he's slowly falling for her :P in surprised Jay didn't choke him to death for being engaged and getting married in a month cuz if that was my kid i would have lol

Please Update Love This Story

@exhaletruth

Awww thanks!!! I've been working on the next chapter this week. It should be up by the end of this weekend.

just started reading this and I absolutely love it :) cant wait for the next update!

@Louistomlinson
You have no idea. He's just getting started with her ;)

Loren is a lucky girl...

@LeeAnnPayne
Wait! Are you a WYLYHW fan? I remember someone pulling the 5 comment trick before lol!!!! I've started drafting the next chapter. So, since you commented 5 times, I will try to finish it tonight. If I can't get it all done, I PROMISE I will have it up by tomorrow night for you :). I don't know if you read the updated summary, but I have fallen in love with my Harry and he is going to remain the third main character in this story AND after the sequel to Snake Eyes, he will get a spin off (and Louis and Loren will still be involved in Harry's tale).

Also, I love Harry. He is so sweet. He is being a great friend to Loren in the current situation. I hope he continues to be a major part of the story

This is comment #4. But yeah, this was fantastic. I love how Louis got a bit jealous. It was totes hot

Plus, this Chapter was absolutely amazing

Cause I would love another Chappy

If I comment five different times, will it count??

@Louistomlinson
Thanks so much!!